Sunday100 drabble:

He braced his hands against the slick, torn vinyl of the seats. The memory of her scent had drawn him here. Closing his eyes, his mind enveloped him in it... close, warm, sweet.

He could feel every hair on his body twitch, readying to grow, prickling just as the tears prickled his eyes.

The traces of scent that remained on the seat next to him were not the same.

He had heard what happened when he left her before, how much pain she’d felt. This time he knew it would make things better. This time he was leaving for her.

Susan - your turn at this was wonderful, too. I've never really written sex scenes. I don't know how. Yours had a natural flow.

Cindy, you have no idea how much I needed to hear that this morning. I had a friend from my writing group beta-read what I've done on my novel thus far for continuity and such, and she sent it back last night. The only section she edited extensively? The one sex scene that's in it so far. I knew damn well it needs some serious editing, and I liked the gist of her suggestions but not the execution. That was my intellectual reaction. My emotional one was "How come I can write everything but sex?" Which led to a stern self-talking-to about how I've been writing stories, off and on, since I was 8 or 9, but sex scenes only in the last couple of months, so of course I'm more of a master at the overall craft than this one specific topic. I mean, I've been telling stories for significantly longer than I've been HAVING sex, much less trying to write about it. But still. I really needed to hear that--thanks!

Susan, I have read, but don't as a rule usually read, stories with much erotica. Some of what I've read has been good (to me). I feel self-conscious when I try to write sex. I'm not sure why.

I'm new to both fic and feedback-giving, so I'm a little self-conscious about that as well, but let me tell you what I liked.

I liked that you were frank in the telling, without making the sex scene either clinical, or unromantic. I liked that the sex had meaning, but you didn't take yourself too seriously in the telling of it. The grin and the laughter made it for me.

t TMI I love when dh and I end up laughing during sex, as long as it isn't act-ending laughter, and even then... t /TMI

I liked that you told it from Buffy's POV (I may still be a little B/S sex gun-shy, I'm not sure, so it may be that having it told in from her POV makes it clear to me she's in it out of choice, not resignation). And I like what you told my from her POV. I liked that you had her thinking. I'm always thinking during sex - I mean the thoughts are usually act or emotion-centric, but, you gave more than just the 'his turgid manhood' stuff, which to me is just not good sex-scene writing.

The Joy of Writing Sex deals with writer discomfort/awkwardness in writing sex scenes. It's honest about the fact that most of us do have problems writing it, at least in part because if you think about it, sex is awfully silly when you try to describe it.

I write a fair amount of sex, and those are still the parts that take me the longest to get something approaching right.

I actually write almost no sex, because I tend to prefer it implied to described. I am as to writing sex as I am to choosing clothing: I think a hint of something hidden is a lot more enticing than the average J-Lo "Look! You can count my pubic hairs!" outfit.

But sometimes nothing will do but good hot porny porn.

Speaking of, another of my random fandoms has attacked me. For anyone who watches Alias and is into slash, it's here.

I liked that you were frank in the telling, without making the sex scene either clinical, or unromantic. I liked that the sex had meaning, but you didn't take yourself too seriously in the telling of it. The grin and the laughter made it for me.

Well, the two things I've concluded about my Philosophy of Sex Scenes, so far are that 1) I'm determined to find a way that's frank and non-purple but still sexy/romantic, and 2) rather than focusing on a play-by-play (which has its place, but I don't think I'm the writer for it), I try to think in terms of what the sex means for one or both characters, and base what I include and exclude on that. So maybe I'm on the right track with that--cool!

It's honest about the fact that most of us do have problems writing it, at least in part because if you think about it, sex is awfully silly when you try to describe it.

Yep. And I'm furthered hampered by the ghost of my Baptist grandmother and the worry over what my friends and family will think when they learn I'm writing this stuff. Which, in some ways, helped me determine my philosophy above--I tried to come up with an answer for the inevitable questions I'm going to get about why I'm writing this, and what I kept coming back to was, "Sex is a part of life. If I left it out entirely, I'd lose what it means for my characters and the way they grow and change."

I saw your conversation about some of this thought process affecting your approach to your novel, (discussion was in Bitches - I think) but wasn't present when it was going on, Susan.

I think I shy away from writing sex, in part, because of my beliefs, but I don't think it needs to be taboo, because of exactly what you said above. Because I do think it has a place in literature, but *I* need to write it in a way that feels right for me, but don't know what that is, I just end up avoiding it, instead. I very much liked what Betsy had to say at the time, about God giving you the gift to write, or your imagination (not sure on the wording).

Also, sometimes some of the sexiest (to me) scenes I've ever watched or read, had no overt sex. I love old time movies, that fade to black and leave it to my imagination. But deb's right, sometimes the story needs a sexy sex scene.

Guh, Dana. I think I'm almost glad I'm not familiar with the Alias cast, because I can sort of cast it randomly. Hot. Hothothot.

Nifty. Thanks, Beverly.