They sat at the counter at four am, drinking Folgers and watching the first beginnings of twilight.

I always think of twilight being at dusk - am I wrong in that?

SA, it's nice. When is it set?

"Sorry! Sorry!" she gasped, holding her stomach for laughter. "Xander dared me too!"

Wouldn't that be 'to'? Because 'too' would mean that Xander dared her as well.

SA, I'm liking it. It explains how Dawn got so good with the books. I love the Xander and Wesley football moments, and the Xander and Dawn teasing.

SA, is that an ode to my chocolate cherry torte?

You've got Dawn's voice down, girl.

One thing:

slowing setting sunlight.

Can I suggest rethinking that one? Sunlight wouldn't set; the light fades because the sun sets.

Nice story!

(one small touch not "the" Tottenham Hotspurs; in the Uk, no article. So it's Arsenal vs. Tottenham Hotspurs, no "the")

I love it, SA!

The couch, however, had undergone, not underwent. And I think Elena's right both on the twilight and the "too". For "beginnings of twilight," could you use "dawning" ?

Connie, I want more, and I want it *now*. Just so you know.

SA, I like it. Very well fitted into the canon, and well written, too.

"Ah, capitalization in the name of fighting evil. Yay America."

(cough) capitalism, I presume? *g*

Okay, hon, the calendar's yours. I'll pack it tonight. (Sobs)

Also, archive request, blah blah blah, headers, blah blah blah.

Fay, same goes for your Spred.

Mmm, SA, that was very satisfying, a moment of peace.

(I was helping on that with tidbits of info, like Arsenal vs Spurs, in im, typing onehanded because I was on the phone with Roz discussing the finale...)

SA, it's nice. When is it set?

Post seasons three and six.

Wouldn't that be 'to'? Because 'too' would mean that Xander dared her as well.

Yes. Fixed.

SA, is that an ode to my chocolate cherry torte?

Yup.

You've got Dawn's voice down, girl.

Thanks! I'm in the minority that loves Dawn.

Sunlight wouldn't set; the light fades because the sun sets.

Right. I saw that on the re-read, but it was two am. Fixed.

(one small touch not "the" Tottenham Hotspurs; in the Uk, no article. So it's Arsenal vs. Tottenham Hotspurs, no "the")

Also fixed.

The couch, however, had undergone, not underwent. And I think Elena's right both on the twilight and the "too". For "beginnings of twilight," could you use "dawning" ?

Yes, and yes. Fixed.

SA, I like it. Very well fitted into the canon, and well written, too.

Thank you! Canon is my friend.

(cough) capitalism, I presume? *g*

I mentioned it was two in the morning, right? Though that's a really funny typo on my part.

Okay, hon, the calendar's yours. I'll pack it tonight. (Sobs)

Woot! I'd say I'm sorry to make you part with the beautiful Lance Bass, but I'd be lying.

Also, archive request, blah blah blah, headers, blah blah blah.

In the mail with headers.

Mmm, SA, that was very satisfying, a moment of peace.

Thanks.

(I was helping on that with tidbits of info, like Arsenal vs Spurs, in im, typing onehanded because I was on the phone with Roz discussing the finale...)

And for someone talking to a chick halfway across the planet, you were very helpful.

Thanks all. It's now quite shiny. This is why Bitches have eyes.

Woot! I'd say I'm sorry to make you part with the beautiful Lance Bass, but I'd be lying.

Paul will be happy.

(Weeps) There's some lovely JC in there, too.

FTR, peeps, this was waiting for me in AIM this morning. Too cute.

SA, hon, with you moving soon... where the devil do I send your tapes, or will you be able to watch the last two Buffys at Hec's and I can just bring the tapes in hand?