Well, you'd better not be thinking what I think you're thinking, because my answer is the same as always — no threesomes unless it's boy-boy-girl. Or Charlize Theron.

Harmony ,'First Date'


Buffista Fic: It Could Be Plot Bunnies  

Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.


Theodosia - Apr 01, 2003 6:52:16 pm PST #3114 of 10001
'we all walk this earth feeling we are frauds. The trick is to be grateful and hope the caper doesn't end any time soon"

Or

She hates detergents smelling like “mountain rain” or “sunshine fresh”, they remind her of the hard work.

Hmm, I might substitute "reek of" for "remind her of the". 'Reek' is a good strong sense word, 'remind' is pretty pale.

(Guess what I'm doing tonight? Yup, a word by word, phrase by phrase, sentence by sentence editing run. I've got words coming out of my ears.)


askye - Apr 01, 2003 6:57:34 pm PST #3115 of 10001
Thrive to spite them

Cool, Theo, thanks for the suggestions, I used them and it tightened it up even more and I was able to get change enough words that I could add in one more scent that I took out before.

Here's the revision:

Anya enjoys doing laundry in this modern world where machines do all the work. She just separates the clothes by types and sets the washer. What she hates are detergents that smell like “mountain rain” or “sunshine fresh”, they reek of the past, when washing clothes was hard work. She asked Xander about the outdoor scents, he said people were nostalgic. She said they were insane. She’d rather have scents like tangerines, Chanel, or new car; she seems to be the only one. Instead she buys Ivory—advertising itself as 99.44% pure!---which leaves her clothes smelling clean, like soap.


Theodosia - Apr 01, 2003 7:01:20 pm PST #3116 of 10001
'we all walk this earth feeling we are frauds. The trick is to be grateful and hope the caper doesn't end any time soon"

t applause


askye - Apr 01, 2003 7:04:27 pm PST #3117 of 10001
Thrive to spite them

Thanks, would you mind if I enlisted your help with the Fraser drabble, when I get that done?


Theodosia - Apr 01, 2003 7:07:05 pm PST #3118 of 10001
'we all walk this earth feeling we are frauds. The trick is to be grateful and hope the caper doesn't end any time soon"

Be my guest, though if I burn out on editing I may be suffering Floppy Brain Syndrome.


Elena - Apr 01, 2003 7:14:43 pm PST #3119 of 10001
Thanks for all the fish.

YAY! Though it was lovely the first time, it's great you got to sneak in pure.


askye - Apr 01, 2003 7:24:33 pm PST #3120 of 10001
Thrive to spite them

Theo, I'm still trying to get it down to 100 words, would you be cool with me emailing it to you later on?


Theodosia - Apr 01, 2003 7:43:58 pm PST #3121 of 10001
'we all walk this earth feeling we are frauds. The trick is to be grateful and hope the caper doesn't end any time soon"

I may be up for another hour, tops, but I'll remember to check my email before crashing....


askye - Apr 01, 2003 7:51:17 pm PST #3122 of 10001
Thrive to spite them

Okay, between the shower, tea, Advil, and my normal meds I'm about to fall asleep right now. So I'll mail it, I have it down to 102 words.


Elena - Apr 01, 2003 7:53:46 pm PST #3123 of 10001
Thanks for all the fish.

Psst, askye, take off 'the end' and you're golden!