Yes, much better, though maybe getting and putting the earplugs in could be quite ostentatious? and maybe they don't really go in?
Stop means no. And no means no. So . . . stop.
Xander ,'Conversations with Dead People'
Buffista Fic: It Could Be Plot Bunnies
Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.
Deena - Mar 20, 2003 9:36:36 am PST #2691 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
Am-Chau Yarkona - Mar 20, 2003 9:38:01 am PST #2692 of 10001
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty
maybe getting and putting the earplugs in could be quite ostentatious? and maybe they don't really go in?
It's a thought. I shall think about it.
Am-Chau Yarkona - Mar 20, 2003 9:39:03 am PST #2693 of 10001
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty
An extra line on the end, something like: "If they didn’t quite fit, nobody needed to know. Frank certainly wasn’t going to tell them."
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Deena - Mar 20, 2003 9:41:06 am PST #2694 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
I think they're pretty universal, just little things in the ears that you squish to fit. Maybe palming them, with some rationalization that he wasn't going to let THEM know he was listening, but that he had to have all the details to make a full report, after he won the bet?
deborah grabien - Mar 20, 2003 9:45:09 am PST #2695 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Well, the little earplugs (sonics) don't block out sound completely; they're designed to muffle the higher registers and cut the db levels down . So the plugs would really have been more symbolic than anything else; he'd still hear them.
Am-Chau Yarkona - Mar 20, 2003 9:54:13 am PST #2696 of 10001
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty
"If he didn't put them in his ears, there was no reason for anyone to know that. And besides, facts made for a full report. Listening wasn't wrong, or dirty. It was his duty."
deborah grabien - Mar 20, 2003 9:59:37 am PST #2697 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Now, that definitely sounds like Frank.
Am-Chau Yarkona - Mar 20, 2003 10:04:20 am PST #2698 of 10001
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty
that definitely sounds like Frank.
Yay! t does dance of Good Charactrization At Last
Elena - Mar 20, 2003 10:12:21 am PST #2699 of 10001
Thanks for all the fish.
You're a sick little puppy, Am. Just for the record.
Teppy, the fic I was asking after wasn't Graveyard Shift it was the Spiderman/Spike. Which I still want to see.
Am-Chau Yarkona - Mar 20, 2003 10:14:18 am PST #2700 of 10001
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty
You're a sick little puppy, Am.
Why, thank you, Elena!