Because I added the segue and deleted the last line while I was half asleep and hopped up on allergy medication.
Xander: I still don't get why we came here to get info about a killer snot monster. Giles: Because it's a killer snot monster from outer space. I did not say that.
'Never Leave Me'
Buffista Fic: It Could Be Plot Bunnies
Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.
P.M. Marc - Mar 17, 2003 9:41:23 am PST #2653 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
deborah grabien - Mar 17, 2003 9:41:43 am PST #2654 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Plei, I love that. Becase yes, I stand by my belief that Wes, after what happened with Connor especially, would be very leery of stating an absolute.
The only thing that doesn't work for me in that? The parentheses. I know that sounds weird (I use them constantly, after all), but, I don't know - hyphens? A la
Tomorrow, if he feels up to it - and Gunn's probably correct in assuming that Wesley will be more than a little hung over - he'll take most of the contents somewhere and give them the decent burial that she never got.
Hmmmm. More coffee is needed. I used to be able to do this cold, but now, caffeine....
Deena - Mar 17, 2003 9:43:50 am PST #2655 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
yeah, hyphen's better.
have a headache, lost my ability to craft a sentence, just started first cup of coffee and noticed that I said I got out of the bath halfway, when I meant I was done with the bath but only halfway through the book. blah.
It still feels a little expositiony, this is me without coffee, with headache, grumpy, take it at your own risk.
P.M. Marc - Mar 17, 2003 9:44:03 am PST #2656 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
You're right. It is more of a dashy statement than a parenthetical. I'd gotten into the habit--because there are so many parenthetical statements that need to be parenthetical in here--of using them.
Changed.
deborah grabien - Mar 17, 2003 9:51:11 am PST #2657 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
It still feels a little expositiony, this is me without coffee, with headache, grumpy, take it at your own risk.
Nothing to take on this one, love; it got its press, ran its course, tickled the Booker people and went firmly out of print a good ten years ago. That ship sailed into the sunset a loooooong time ago.
Connie Neil - Mar 17, 2003 9:56:13 am PST #2658 of 10001
brillig
still mourning Lilah ...
I wonder what they did do with her body. Maybe Connor can volunteer where he buried Holtz. Hey, Buffy's got her own little graveyard. t /morbid
P.M. Marc - Mar 17, 2003 9:57:23 am PST #2659 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
Connor burned Holtz, IIRC. (Which I might not, because it was Tomorrow, and I, umm, got distracted about 15 minutes before the end.)
Steph L. - Mar 17, 2003 10:04:54 am PST #2660 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism
Connor burned Holtz, IIRC. (Which I might not, because it was Tomorrow, and I, umm, got distracted about 15 minutes before the end.)
No, he did. Very Viking funeral.
P.M. Marc - Mar 17, 2003 10:05:47 am PST #2661 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
Oh good. So the shirtless Wes didn't totally fry my brain.
Steph L. - Mar 17, 2003 10:07:26 am PST #2662 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism
Well, I didn't say THAT...