Spike: At least give me Wesley's office since he's gone. Angel: He's not gone. He's on a leave of absence. Spike: Yeah, right. Boo-hoo. Thought he killed his bloody father. Try staking your mother when she's coming on to you! Harmony: Well…that explains a lot.

'Destiny'


Buffista Fic: It Could Be Plot Bunnies  

Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.


Theodosia - Mar 12, 2003 4:13:03 pm PST #2410 of 10001
'we all walk this earth feeling we are frauds. The trick is to be grateful and hope the caper doesn't end any time soon"

Sometimes he dreams of Marie, appallingly young and innocent, handcuffed in the boat, or lashed to the machine atop the Statue of Liberty. Except now her piteous cries arouse him, and all his patient explanation why he must kill her for the good of all mutant-kind fails him, and he moves to take her, as he himself was taken when he was no older. Or else he dreams of how it felt to actually touch her, to feel his powers, his self slip away, like the little death of orgasm. Sometimes he is Marie, chained to the posts like Andromeda, sobbing for help, for release, for his parents to come and save him. And then a shining stranger is there to consume him – sometimes with his face, or Charles’s, or even that of Wolverine.

And then there are the dreams with Wolverine. Magneto is contemptuous of the animalistic Sabertooth and Toad, brutally twisted by the world’s treatment of mutants. They are evolutionary off-shoots, tools he can use to a better end. Wolverine would be another such; Magneto has seen him slash with those metal blades; what could such a man be other than an animal, a guided weapon at best? He is surprised that Charles willingly associates with such a one; Charles has limited his recruiting to the comely, the civilized ones. Magneto is content that it should be so; he sees himself as the force that will change the world, and the kindler, gentler mutants such as Charles and his brood will inherit it. But still, Wolverine – how that snarling face haunts him. Mystique had stolen the records that Jean Grey made of his physiology, Charles’s speculations about his hidden personal history – and Magneto is intrigued by the thought that this Logan was the victim of hideous experimentation, calculated sadism for science, reminding him of the Nazi scientists who got their hands on young Erik for far too long.

He imagines what such torture might have been, in his dreams – bones replaced by impossibly tough metal, the pain and fire inside, such as he knows when his power flows through him. And he imagines torturing Wolverine, his power manipulating those bones, animating him like a puppet, pulling him to pieces and putting them back, like clay over a metal armature. Or else he dreams of the animal-man crawling over him, devouring him, forcing those claws again and again into his bleeding body….

In the morning after such nights – and they are frequent here – Magneto wakes, shattered, weary from the parade of horrors, soaked with sweat or other fluids, and sits on his cot, getting his breath under control, and forces himself to think of his goals, of the iron control he must assume to reach them, dismissing his doubts and his humanity as mere paltry things.

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deborah grabien - Mar 12, 2003 4:31:42 pm PST #2411 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

But they put their pants on one leg at a time like the rest of us.

Generally backwards, if I don't hunt for the tag first.

T, I'm ignorant of virtually all of the Magneto backstory, except for the bit I saw in the movie. But read as a story, with no associations? That's a honkin' good little read. It's very evocative of his personal history.

One thing jiggled me a bit, though, in the first section: the thing about the guards signing ritualistically in and out. I read that three times and no matter what I did, I kept seeing them dancing around timeclocks shaped liked pentagrams. A bit disconcerting, especially since what follows and ends that paragraph (They are unimaginative men, stolid and righteous, not unlike the Nazis of his youth) is so clear and unornamented.

Just my ha'penny.


erikaj - Mar 12, 2003 4:39:31 pm PST #2412 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

You guys! Bad fic writers, messing with my metaphors!


deborah grabien - Mar 12, 2003 4:41:25 pm PST #2413 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Bad fic writers, messing with my metaphors!

I deny everything! I did nothing naughty! In fact, I am the very model of a modern - oh, wait, that's Gilbert & Sullivan.....

Someone so needs to filk that thing, and make it about fic.


Steph L. - Mar 12, 2003 4:50:10 pm PST #2414 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism

Two questions about my fic:

(1) As a title -- what about "Redux"?

(2) It's been a while since I've committed fic -- where should I send it? I can think of the BFA and G_O, but that's all that's coming to mind.


deborah grabien - Mar 12, 2003 5:05:11 pm PST #2415 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Oh, I like "Redux."

I like it muchly.


Steph L. - Mar 12, 2003 5:07:32 pm PST #2416 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism

Thankee. I was tossing around "This Year's Girl" in my mind, wanting to convey that sense of "this year's girl returns, with a few new improvements." And my brain finally remembered that it knows words and coughed up "Redux."

Man, finding a title was harder than writing the story!


deborah grabien - Mar 12, 2003 5:11:02 pm PST #2417 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

As for where to send them - I'm completely clueless. I wave my feeble technochallenged little stumps in the air and nice people offer to help me.


SuziQ - Mar 12, 2003 5:32:35 pm PST #2418 of 10001
Back tattoos of the mother is that you are absolutely right - Ame

Steph - I like Redux too...it fits nicely.

OK - time for you write more fic...pretty please???


Rebecca Lizard - Mar 12, 2003 5:41:49 pm PST #2419 of 10001
You sip / say it's your crazy / straw say it's you're crazy / as you bicycle your soul / with beauty in your basket

Theo, that's lovely. I mean, I don't know anything about the X-Men. I really don't. But that's a gorgeous piece of prose.