I'm pretty certain it's Alonna. I'll check the casefiles. We were in the car, so I didn't bother to double check.
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Buffista Fic: It Could Be Plot Bunnies
Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.
Dead right
doing the dance of helpfulness
Deena--and Perkins!--take your time, the thing is 106 pages in WordPerfect on my machine.
Deena--and Perkins!--take your time, the thing is 106 pages in WordPerfect on my machine.
yeah, but I'm greedy
(thunk)
sound of my head hitting my desk. We drove 350 miles today, into the Sierra foothills, all over the place. Must. Sleep.
Alonna is how it's spelled in the shooting scripts.
Also, Steph, I've been thinking about your story. I was wondering about Buffy's voice. It's pretty good for this season, but, this season she's been kind of generic. My eyes glaze over when she starts lecturing. I really liked the point where she got harsh with the SiT because it didn't read monotone. However, I'm thinking specifically of the point where she's telling Faith that they've tried to kill one another in the past but now they have to work together. Faith has already said she's come to help, so Buffy is doing her boring speechifying thing again, at least that's how it read to me.
That's what I intended, though. I don't mean to make her unsympathetic, but she IS having a season of speechifying.
Alonna is how it's spelled in the shooting scripts.
Ouch. Since the name is a feminisation of Alan, I'm curious about their papa.
Deena, just for you:
The album side wound down, the needle skipped to silence and clicked itself off. We made love in the doorway, standing up, me with my back bruising against the doorjamb, half under lamplight, half under starlight.
Better?
ooh, yes. (Even though I'm not Deena.)
Working on big finale right now. It's a writers group night, so I have to cook and clean the place, but I can't do any of that until I get Nic out the door and I wouldn't do it until I've had a second cup of coffee anyway.