Someone stop me from signing up for the Lindsey Torture fic group.
Police procedure has changed since I was little.
Wash ,'The Message'
Buffista Fic: It Could Be Plot Bunnies
Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.
P.M. Marc - Mar 07, 2003 9:47:06 pm PST #2266 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
deborah grabien - Mar 07, 2003 9:57:19 pm PST #2267 of 10001
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Someone stop me from signing up for the Lindsey Torture fic group.HELLthefuckNO.
I wanna watch....
Steph, post when done, please.
Steph L. - Mar 07, 2003 9:59:13 pm PST #2268 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism
You betcha. I'll have to tinker with it tomorrow, b/c I need sleep now. I have to get up early tomorrow for a chiropractor appointment, which is a priority these days.
I think it'll be squeaky Vi who opens the door...
deborah grabien - Mar 07, 2003 10:02:40 pm PST #2269 of 10001
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Heh. I can see VampFaith mentally earmarking the squeaky kid for a midnight snack.
(Can we give her Kennedy too? Huh? Can we? Pretty please?)
Beverly - Mar 07, 2003 10:29:24 pm PST #2270 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Steph, loved it. Something sort of ironic--I "heard" Faith speaking your dialogue--and she had her old accent.
SA, I really liked Donuts, too. One nitpick, however. Giles would never ever, except in extremis, clean his glasses on his shirt. He--at least at the time when he was the school librarian and dressed in a suit--always had a clean handkerchief for just such a purpose.
ed. for punct.
deborah grabien - Mar 07, 2003 10:40:25 pm PST #2271 of 10001
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Bev!
Everyone is not saying a word about last installment of Needfire and I used Pink Floyd and I need to know if it works there. The segment's not done; it's just the first half. Rest of it is in the meadow the next day, but it's short. Then the biggie on her birthday, then an aftermath i've already written in my head.
Beverly - Mar 07, 2003 10:49:18 pm PST #2272 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
OH my god, Deb. That bit left me drooling and speechless. Just sort of hanging in space here waiting for the next installment.
It's very dreamy, in that slightly altered zoned way, and the music underscores that, and the lyrics (perfect lyrics! You got to use the song!) do too. But even though the emotion and the focus on each other is intense, and deep, the foreboding is there, still there, and were waiting to find out what it is.
That help any?
deborah grabien - Mar 07, 2003 10:52:34 pm PST #2273 of 10001
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Yes, thanks. Major thing was, is it too big a shift from her usual sort of power-control thing? I was trying for a sort of dislocate but only a partial, thanks to the hash and the non-controllability of what's about to happen.
If not, this is good; I can proceed with the rest of that bit. Otherwise, I'd have to rework it. This is entirely new turf for me.
Beverly - Mar 07, 2003 11:12:50 pm PST #2274 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
a sort of dislocate but only a partial, thanks to the hash and the non-controllability of what's about to happen.
Nailed it. At least that's what I felt.
deborah grabien - Mar 07, 2003 11:17:11 pm PST #2275 of 10001
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Excellence! Thankee once more, Mme. Editrix.
There's a typo at the end of chap 5 of Matty groves, which has been fixed, and I wrote a bit more, which I'll send in the morning.