t adores Plei
t adores deb
I can't critique. It just is. As it should be, inevitable as breath.
This is a lovely line, Bev.
Come on out, River. The nice man wants to kidnap you.
Simon ,'Objects In Space'
Buffista Fic: It Could Be Plot Bunnies
Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.
Rebecca Lizard - Mar 02, 2003 10:11:20 pm PST #2002 of 10001
You sip / say it's your crazy / straw say it's you're crazy / as you bicycle your soul / with beauty in your basket
Rebecca Lizard - Mar 02, 2003 10:12:50 pm PST #2003 of 10001
You sip / say it's your crazy / straw say it's you're crazy / as you bicycle your soul / with beauty in your basket
Oh yeah, I was gonna say, there seems to be a typo--
not have her burned his or her retinas
have her burned onto?
deborah grabien - Mar 02, 2003 10:13:54 pm PST #2004 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Or "into" his or her retinas?
edit: and, dear sirs/mesdames, what precisely is a "slumber nut?" Because I lurve this phrase and would know more of it.
Deena - Mar 02, 2003 10:20:09 pm PST #2005 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
I posted, got embroiled in a conversation with Greg, and then realized that my computer is so slow that a dozen posts appeared before mine did. Very weird. I had to go back and see what was said. That was a good thing, though, since I got to read Plei's finale.
The whole science geek thing is SO perfect! You nailed Fred really well there. It reminded me of what I liked about her when she was first introduced. Now I'm wondering if you could make her more Fredly at the very beginning, because, up until I read her introducing herself, I wasn't sure who was digging around under Cordy's desk. It's not at all necessary to the story, just a vague thought.
Connie Neil - Mar 02, 2003 10:23:27 pm PST #2006 of 10001
brillig
slumber nut is word play on the phrase numberslut, which is someone who tries to maneuver past everyone else in order to get the post with the cool number. To wit, my attempting to get 1999 with that Prince quote.
deborah grabien - Mar 02, 2003 10:32:50 pm PST #2007 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Damn, connie, I should have known that.
Braaaaaaaains! Leeeeeeeaking!
Connie Neil - Mar 02, 2003 10:34:56 pm PST #2008 of 10001
brillig
Braaaaaaaains! Leeeeeeeaking!
looks at bottom of foot. Euw. Where's the mop?
deborah grabien - Mar 02, 2003 10:35:38 pm PST #2009 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Heh. Connie, I'd envisioned a "slumbernut" to be the kernel of a plot idea, planted just before sleep.
Connie Neil - Mar 02, 2003 10:39:12 pm PST #2010 of 10001
brillig
kernel of a plot idea, planted just before sleep.
No, those are more like little pellets deposited by the damned plot bunny, who went ker-flopping across your bed when you weren't looking.
deborah grabien - Mar 02, 2003 10:45:33 pm PST #2011 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
ewwwww (checking bottom of shoe....)