River: I didn't think you'd come for me. Simon: Well, you're a dummy.

'Serenity'


Buffista Fic: It Could Be Plot Bunnies  

Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.


Gandalfe - Feb 24, 2003 11:49:34 am PST #1640 of 10001
The generation that could change the world is still looking for its car keys.

He was on his third helping of chicken tikka marsala, and he'd almost fought Ethan for the naan.

Nit picking: Marsala is a wine, used for cooking often, but not so much in Indian food. Masala (no R) is the Indian recipe. One great version of it is found here.


Connie Neil - Feb 24, 2003 11:51:35 am PST #1641 of 10001
brillig

Thanks, I'll pull the r before I post the finished product.


deborah grabien - Feb 24, 2003 11:54:53 am PST #1642 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

I saw marsala as masala (which is a multi-faceted spice mixture). Didn't even see the R in there.

Connie, I wouldn't lean on you (although I would like more of this, yes please); I had precisely that experience with a ST;TNG screenplay, submitted through agent and loved by Pillar/Berman. It was called "Guinan in Wonderland" and they adored it and it completely conflicted with their at that time unreleased agreed-upon history for Guinan. So they rejected it, with notes about how wonderful it was. Broke my heart. And I maintain to this day that OUR backstory was better than THEIR backstory. Buggeration.

But where I'm kinda going is, if you're going to write more? Do the title to reflect the entire story arc, maybe?


Connie Neil - Feb 24, 2003 12:15:03 pm PST #1643 of 10001
brillig

Do the title to reflect the entire story arc, maybe?

And I'm coming up with something like the Road movies with slash. "Rayne and Giles on the Road to ..." And I think I'd best not finish that line.


deborah grabien - Feb 24, 2003 12:17:38 pm PST #1644 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

"...Perdition"!

Seriously, connie, where's the heart of the story arc going, in your eyes? Because that's going to be where the title lives, right?


Connie Neil - Feb 24, 2003 12:23:54 pm PST #1645 of 10001
brillig

I've always seen the basic tension between Ethan and Giles as acknowledging that the underlying attraction/affection is still there (and one can run that as non-slashy as you like, it could be a brother thing--no, really!) despite the vastly different roads they've taken. The bond that existed in the Eyghon days and reflected in the two of them getting plastered together as they relived the old days is strong, but the two of them get close to each other and panic.

A journey, of sorts, reflecting them traveling around finding the potentials. Learning to trust each other again, if they ever truly did, while resisting the impulse to lash out and keep their distance from each other.

I think I'll send that theme wandering around the mental thesaurus, see what words stick.


Theodosia - Feb 24, 2003 12:25:17 pm PST #1646 of 10001
'we all walk this earth feeling we are frauds. The trick is to be grateful and hope the caper doesn't end any time soon"

Hmm... titles?

  • "Smouldering Ruins"?
  • "A Gift of Janus"?
  • "Two-Faced Coin"?


Steph L. - Feb 24, 2003 12:27:46 pm PST #1647 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism

Different lines and scenes from Deb's stories have been running through my head each time I wake up

I've been thinking about it all day, too! And even as Deb is asking Connie for more, I'm still waving my "Deb, Please Write More Amanda!" flag.


Elena - Feb 24, 2003 12:29:04 pm PST #1648 of 10001
Thanks for all the fish.

Maybe just a play on 'Potential'. It can refer to the Potentials, it could refer to the reawakened relationship...


Theodosia - Feb 24, 2003 12:30:03 pm PST #1649 of 10001
'we all walk this earth feeling we are frauds. The trick is to be grateful and hope the caper doesn't end any time soon"

The best titles are all portmanteaus.