feedback in detail (with a few minor beta details)

Sweet!

I finished it so tired I could barely keep my eyes open, let alone form words that made sense, so when I say it's unbeta'd, I mean not even I'd read it through all the way. The last few paragraphs could be in Spanish for all I know.

Send it to me, and I'll beta.

It's also up in my LJ, if you want to just copy and paste. I won't be near the file for a while.

I can't believe I'm awake at this hour, but I just posted the new fic, Lovingkindness, and of course must tell the world.

He was Sex and Death and terrible burning Love.

This is the single best description I have ever heard. Ever.

I can't believe I'm awake at this hour, but I just posted the new fic, Lovingkindness, and of course must tell the world.

Woo hoo! But I think you might have forgotten to close a font tag, because about three quarter of the story has a strike through it.

So do you think my boss would mind if I called in sick to work because I'd rather stay home and read the new fic?

Oh! Here I am running out the door. Won't be back until too late tonight to get on line. Yep, the plan is to not get any work done tomorrow until I get a chance to read Lovingkindness.

I did not have the strike through, but I am in Opera, so perhaps it fixed itself.

I made myself a nice cup of coffee and read, and of course bawled my fool head off. I especially liked-- well-- all of it-- but I liked Giles making martinis for Willow and Giles and Spike talking, and Willow taking Buffy to a gay bar. Also, Willow getting laid. All those things cracked me up-- in addition to the crying-- so this is why I love Herself.

Life is very cool sometimes. I was supposed to make a day trip over to my mother's house to get her house prepared for her return from her summer up north. When I read Herself's post I thought to myself how I wished she were coming home the next week so I could do the house prep next weekend when I have 3 days instead of one.

I am packing up my car and my sister calls and tells me not to come because Mom is not coming until the next week so I should hold off.

I just finished making a pot of tea, the printer is running and I am ready to read. Hmmm. Life is good.

Oh, how I love you guys.

And yes, the strikethrough problem (which I fixed) doesn't show up in all browsers. It didn't show up in mine, oddly. (IE5 on the Mac)