Susan, edits and comments insent.
I could squeeze you until you popped like warm champagne, and you'd beg me to hurt you just a little bit more.
Fuffy ,'Storyteller'
The Great Write Way
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
deborah grabien - Jan 04, 2005 11:39:19 am PST #9236 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
SailAweigh - Jan 04, 2005 12:42:29 pm PST #9237 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
To Be or Not To Be: Upside Down Drabble
The anticipation was excruciating.
Trips into Madison two or three times a year were very special occasions. Christmas was coming. I felt on tenterhooks as the car cruised down the highway. Despite the snow in the fields, the road was clear. Coming in to the S-curve, it suddenly felt like we were skating. As the car fishtailed into the second half of the curve we went airborn over the cornstalks. My brother’s body dropped onto mine, slamming me into the door. While the car hovered there, on the edge of uncertainty, all I wondered was “would it or wouldn’t it?”
Pix - Jan 04, 2005 8:55:54 pm PST #9238 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie
Hi!
It's very late and I doubt anyone's around, but I just finished another essay and am looking for beta readers. Any takers?
If no one is around tonight, I'll ask again tomorrow.
dcp - Jan 04, 2005 8:58:35 pm PST #9239 of 10001
The more I learn, the more I realize how little I know.
I'm in.
JohnSweden - Jan 04, 2005 9:00:48 pm PST #9240 of 10001
I can't even.
Hey Kristin, I'm still up (I don't leave the mountain time zone until tomorrow). I could give some quick feedback tonight, then more measured feedback late tomorrow night.
Pix - Jan 04, 2005 9:04:04 pm PST #9241 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie
It's still super fresh and new--I just finished it, so I've barely even looked it over. All I really want right now is some general feedback (I may change my mind after a reread tomorrow and request more specific).
Thank you both! Insent in a sec...
deborah grabien - Jan 04, 2005 9:10:09 pm PST #9242 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Send, ma'am, but I won't get to it until tomorrow. Was baking.
Pix - Jan 04, 2005 9:14:38 pm PST #9243 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie
Deb, thank you. Insent and hoping you like it.
JohnSweden - Jan 04, 2005 9:53:59 pm PST #9244 of 10001
I can't even.
Backflung, Kristin. That's great stuff to be capturing in your own voice.
Pix - Jan 05, 2005 3:23:03 am PST #9245 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie
Thanks for early feedback. Version 2 backflung to all three of you.