It's still super fresh and new--I just finished it, so I've barely even looked it over. All I really want right now is some general feedback (I may change my mind after a reread tomorrow and request more specific).
Thank you both! Insent in a sec...
Jayne: That's a good idea. Good idea. Tell us where the stuff's at so I can shoot you. Mal: Point of interest? Offering to shoot us might not work so well as an incentive as you might imagine.
'Out Of Gas'
The Great Write Way
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
Pix - Jan 04, 2005 9:04:04 pm PST #9241 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie
deborah grabien - Jan 04, 2005 9:10:09 pm PST #9242 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Send, ma'am, but I won't get to it until tomorrow. Was baking.
Pix - Jan 04, 2005 9:14:38 pm PST #9243 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie
Deb, thank you. Insent and hoping you like it.
JohnSweden - Jan 04, 2005 9:53:59 pm PST #9244 of 10001
I can't even.
Backflung, Kristin. That's great stuff to be capturing in your own voice.
Pix - Jan 05, 2005 3:23:03 am PST #9245 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie
Thanks for early feedback. Version 2 backflung to all three of you.
Karl - Jan 05, 2005 5:09:44 am PST #9246 of 10001
I adore all you motherfuckers so much -- PMM.
Drabble: Upside Down (100 words, excluding title)
I have never been graceful. A stray comment about my awkwardness stung me, and that wound hasn't healed. I never go out to clubs, preferring the reptilian solitude of my book-lined cave.
But the music ....
Some have their boy-bands and puppyslash as guilty pleasures; mine is a silly retro band called the A-Teens -- bubblegum ABBA covers by generically pretty European teenagers. No serious-music cred here, no philosophical lyrics that demand attention, no complex rhythms or harmonies to distract from the sense of forward motion.
Upside down, dancin' on the ceiling ....
And my dragonish inner child chair-dances, unashamed.
erikaj - Jan 05, 2005 6:32:36 am PST #9247 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!
I am deeply, deeply shamed. tSpike Every thought I've had for this topic involves Pap tests.
Beverly - Jan 05, 2005 11:01:37 am PST #9248 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
And my dragonish inner child chair-dances, unashamed.
Karl! Tagline, please? Pretty please?
erikaj - Jan 05, 2005 11:04:56 am PST #9249 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!
I know...that is pretty. Not like me, but pretty.
Beverly - Jan 05, 2005 11:11:39 am PST #9250 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Well, it was between that one and the reptillian book-lined cave line. But the chair-dancing is happier. I can use a little happier.