Sorry, Captain. I'm real sorry. I shoulda kept better care of her. Usually she lets me know when something's wrong. Maybe she did, I just wasn't paying attention...

Kaylee ,'Out Of Gas'


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deborah grabien - Oct 21, 2004 7:53:26 am PDT #7617 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Liese! WHEET! Lovelovelove. And boy, does it rings bells. You would get on well with my world-class bassplayer.

Lilty, got it, and many many thanks.

I figured out who the singer in the story is, who the best friend was, and why the singer's silence is ironic. Hoping to finish the story by the weekend; I need to get moving on "Cruel Sister" and also some on "Burden of Memory". It's possible I am slightly overextended, what with the going to Seattle to kick off book tour next weekend.

And maybe the wife can send cakes with files in them.

Honey, if you're heading for Gitmo, I'm going to be in whatever charming little oubliette the Bushies use for prisoners they want less visible. Send lawyers, guns and money! (warren zevon love)


erikaj - Oct 21, 2004 8:00:54 am PDT #7618 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

This is true... maybe I could hide a file in my chair somewhere, convince 'em it was Wheelchair Parts...ABs never understand about that stuff and those guys won't, for sure.


Steph L. - Oct 21, 2004 8:36:50 am PDT #7619 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism

Send lawyers, guns and money! (warren zevon love)

....and I suddenly got the Farscape reference!

(There's a 3-parter of episodes titled "Liars, Guns, and Money." I never realized it was a bit of a shoutout.)

t /totally off-topic


§ ita § - Oct 21, 2004 8:37:18 am PDT #7620 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

(me too, Steph)


Steph L. - Oct 21, 2004 8:38:16 am PDT #7621 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism

t loving ita


deborah grabien - Oct 21, 2004 8:42:28 am PDT #7622 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Of course, it's also basically the Bush family anthem:

Well, I went home with the waitress
The way I always do
How was I to know
She was with the Russians, too

I was gambling in Havana
I took a little risk
Send lawyers, guns and money
Dad, get me out of this!

I'm the innocent bystander
Somehow I got stuck
Between the rock and the hard place
And I'm down on my luck
And I'm down on my luck
And I'm down on my luck

Now I'm hiding in Honduras
I'm a desperate man
Send lawyers, guns and money
The shit has hit the fan

Send lawyers, guns and money...

BTW, in conversation with Roz Kaveney on the phone yesterday, she informs me that there is an episode of Farscape (never seen the show) that I am now commanded to see, if possible. Something about a character hallucinating that all the other characters are Looney Toon characters?


Katie M - Oct 21, 2004 8:43:56 am PDT #7623 of 10001
I was charmed (albeit somewhat perplexed) by the fannish sensibility of many of the music choices -- it's like the director was trying to vid Canada. --loligo on the Olympic Opening Ceremonies

Revenging Angel, I think. (The Farscape episode in question, I mean.)


Beverly - Oct 21, 2004 8:47:20 am PDT #7624 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

It's a great ep, Deb, but without a working knowledge of the characters as they usually are, I don't think you're going to find it very enjoyable. I could be wrong, of course.


deborah grabien - Oct 21, 2004 8:47:56 am PDT #7625 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

(writing down title)

Thanks, Katie. If anyone hears about it being shown, can they ping me?


Susan W. - Oct 21, 2004 8:57:09 am PDT #7626 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Today is my freelancing day, and I'm working on a personal experience essay to submit to one of the local parenting magazines. Here's my lead paragraph:

The worst moment so far of my life as a parent came when my daughter was ten days old. At a routine pediatrician visit, we discovered that not only had Annabel not yet begun to regain her birth weight, her weight was still slipping slowly downward from where it had been a few days after birth. It wasn’t yet an emergency, but it was a crisis.

I really, really don't like the second sentence, but I can't figure out a way to make it pithier or break it up. Thoughts?