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The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


§ ita § - Oct 20, 2004 11:26:40 am PDT #7591 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

This was his closest yet. He watched her buy Boy Scout popcorn, and join the line in the dry cleaner across the street.

Pulling his brim lower, he watched her blend in with her mundane surroundings.

Suddenly he was shoved from behind, knocking his hat askew and jolting the bag out of his grip.

"Sorry, sir," said the boy, picking it up.

"Give that here," he growled, barging forward to reclaim his tools.

He looked up, quickly, at the security camera he now stood under, face exposed. Then over, at her, smiling coldly from the back of a departing cab.


Nutty - Oct 20, 2004 11:35:01 am PDT #7592 of 10001
"Mister Spock is on his fanny, sir. Reports heavy damage."

(For the record, yes, the umpires reversed the initial call and did mark A-Rod out for interference. As a result, the run he batted in did not score; if he'd just gotten tagged at first, that run would have counted.)

(Somebody asked Arroyo last night, "What is it with you and him?" and Arroyo, as is his wont, had no idea.)


deborah grabien - Oct 20, 2004 12:10:10 pm PDT #7593 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Nutty, good - I didn't see the call reversal, because our TiVo had cut over to record something. Last I saw was that little prick Jeter, umpiring from the dugout.

I make no secret of my Yankee loathing, but I would, honestly, have been just as livid had the teams been reversed. Bad umpiring is bad for the game, period.

Can I put in a way-early request for beta readers? It's the Johnny Cash music anthology story, working title "The Gravekeeper's Memories of a Long Black Veil". A ghost story. Going to be a day or three, but begging early.


Ginger - Oct 20, 2004 12:14:51 pm PDT #7594 of 10001
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

I'd be interested, Deb. I do know the song by heart. I guess they're doing songs Johnny Cash made famous? He didn't write it, although I think he was the first to record it.


deborah grabien - Oct 20, 2004 12:17:53 pm PDT #7595 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Ginger, yep, songs he made famous.


Susan W. - Oct 20, 2004 4:08:01 pm PDT #7596 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

X-posted with Natter:

I just got my November issue of Romance Writers Report. There's a rather chilling story of an author who had her home raided and her writing materials confiscated under the Patriot Act. She didn't want her name published, but she's multi-published with one of the RWA's recognized print publishers. She was researching what sounds like a romantic suspense novel set in Cambodia, so she searched websites, bought books online, and checked books out from her library on Cambodian history and current events, including landmines and terrorism, some of it connected to Al Qaeda. Some excerpts:

Interviewer: Did you have any reason to suspect you were being targeted for a raid, any advanced notice?

Author: No. Not a clue. Although, for awhile prior to the raid, I thought I was being stalked. Mail was missing from my box, I caught someone searching my trash, I saw a prowler in my yard and actually called the police. One of my neighbors saw someone watching from across the street--she wasn't sure it was my house or hers. She called the police, too--turns out they were taking surveillance photos.

The interviewer next asked her to describe the raid:

Author: The raid took place last fall, pre-dawn, and it lasted three hours. They banged at my front door first, damaged it coming in, displayed weapons, and threatened to kill my dogs. After that, imagine everything you've ever seen on TV, only worse. There were six male agents. One was in the "bad cop" mode the entire time, trying to intimidate me, yelling at me, threatening me. When I had to use the restroom, he sent an agent along to the bathroom with me. It was a multi-agency raid: Postal Inspectors (for the website/email end of it), the FBI, and three officers who would only identify themselves as Federal Police. They took so much--computers, photocopier, files, books, discs, computer programs, CDs of the music by which I write, contracts, absolutely everything I had connected to the writing world. They took pictures off my walls, my office television, pens, a case of paper, postage stamps...even now, after all these months, I still go to get something only to discover it missing.

She goes on to say they eventually brought her computers back, and according to her techie friend she had look at them, they're bugged. She got her disks back, ruined, but they still have everything else.

The search warrant they had was specific to her writing and research and included book titles. Though it wasn't on the warrant, they were very excited about the fact she owned the Writer's Digest "Scene of the Crime" series.

She's going on as she has before, but offers the following advice to writers who want to fly under the radar:

Don't buy your books online. It's tougher with the library issue because your check-out habits are monitored. Not every title, mind you, but...Homeland Security does watch some "flagged" books. Perhaps instead of checking out a book you think could be flagged, read it at the library [and] make notes or photocopies...

She also suggests using library computers for sensitive internet research.


Amy - Oct 20, 2004 4:26:08 pm PDT #7597 of 10001
Because books.

Holy fuck, Susan. Mine came today and I hadn't looked at it yet. It's really kind of terrifying -- do you know how many times during copyediting I've looked up gun sites to check the spelling or model number of a particular firearm to make sure an author knows what s/he's talking about? That's just guns, obviously, and I highly doubt I'm about to be raided since most of Internet hits are Amazon, here, LJ, and lately stuff about the Hamptons, but it makes you wonder what someone else would "see" if they were monitoring your Internet use/purchases or library loans.


Susan W. - Oct 20, 2004 4:30:30 pm PDT #7598 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Tell me about it. I just made a "hey Feds" disclaimer over in Natter just in case they're not aware that all those weapons I'm looking up aren't exactly what you'd call state-of-the-art for any time after the Napoleonic Wars.


Liese S. - Oct 20, 2004 4:44:38 pm PDT #7599 of 10001
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

Yeesh. That's upsetting. Maybe it wasn't such a good idea to do the "break down Echelon by sending email with all the trigger words in it" day.


deborah grabien - Oct 20, 2004 5:24:48 pm PDT #7600 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Man, someone want to pass me shredded documents for decorative use on my tinfoil hat?

Two more weeks, two more weeks, two more weeks...