Hey, Deb, I'm going to e-mail you a story I wrote and revised heavily a few years ago. You might find it interesting, in light of this discussion.

Oh God. Ack. It's so bad. And the first draft is even more awful. But it was in third-person.

Kewl.

BTW, Susan, when you check in? Will be curling up with latest chapter of Lucy later today.

edit - P-C, cool on the sending. Will read later - my brain is elsewhere at the moment.

People think that is why we are close, Deb. A networking stunt so that you can give me the secret handshake...but then I told you the fam doesn't understand me so much, right?

But what's driving me crazy is the rationale I'm getting here: "Hey, I wrote a novel! You're published! Can you read my book and make your agent read it?"

Ooooh, I hate that. It's such a terrible imposition to put on anyone.

I heart victor. I'm going to mimeograph copies of that and hand it out with candy to all my little star-struck students.

Mimeograph away!

West Coast tour update.

Redondo Beach on the 25th. Orange, CA, on the 26th. Probably the Oakland Slam on the 28th, which will likely put us in the SF-area for that Thursday and Friday, then back to do the Salon thing that weekend in LA.

Whew. Getting there.

Is that October, Victor?

edited: never mind, I went back and found out it is January.

Victor, kewl.

I have a piece wandering around in my head. I think I need to go write the damned thing.

I don't know what this is. I just know it wanted out.

A Fragmented Picture of a Moment in Time

Fragment: a pile of paper on my desk, the phone ringing. You've called because you're alone at home, you're bored, you're missing me. I'm the only one you want to talk to. No one else will do.

Corner of a picture: moment of perfection stretching out to an hour of happiness. I forget myself, laughing, listening, chivvying, beaming support and love. The entire office, on this chilly September day in a San Francisco publishing house, seems drenched in a mantilla of bright sun-dappled joy.

Wholeness: You ask me, in that peaceful voice, that cocoon of momentary contentment - Do you remember when I rang you up from London? The night the lights went out and I couldn't find my way to the studio? The night someone told me, you can't get there from here, and I rang you up, wanting to find my way home to California?

Completion: my own voice, answering, yes, oh love, yes, I remember. You asked me to keep the light on and I kept it on, I kept it burning, it was for you, always for you -

Torn across: I didn't say that. I wanted to say that, it was in my mind and in my heart, but suddenly I remembered where I was, the lace-bright office suddenly full of people standing too close, making excuses, wanting to hear me talk to my rock star. Nice people but they're too present, suddenly, they're avid, they're eyes and anticipation for something they want to share and can't have and don't deserve

and the room darkens

and I'm suddenly aware

and I laugh, and say something about work, I'll be home around half six, give dinner some thought, I'll cook it.

Your voice deflates, subtle, but I know it, I know it as I know myself and I gave the wrong answer.

Fragment: All the history. All my life. Everything and nothing.

edited: never mind, I went back and found out it is January.

A-yup. And Deb: quite nice.

Thanks. So is the memory, mostly. Mostly.

Small things, little screw-ups, moments I wish I could go back and reclaim.