Insending (then running out for train). It has the prologue, as well - the entire things 11 pages in accepted ms format, but ignore the prologue if you've already read it.
Illyria: Wesley's dead. I'm feeling grief for him. I can't seem to control it. I wish to do more violence. Spike: Well, wishes just happen to be horses today.
'Not Fade Away'
The Great Write Way
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
deborah grabien - Sep 29, 2004 3:41:42 pm PDT #6891 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Beverly - Sep 29, 2004 7:24:03 pm PDT #6892 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Me too, please Deb, when you're back.
victor infante - Sep 29, 2004 8:49:39 pm PDT #6893 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.
New column's up: Pavlov’s Poets and the Road More Traveled: It’s a good time to be a poet. So why does that make me uneasy?
Plugged elsewhere, but I'm always interested in what folks in this thread have to say, as the column's aimed at, well, writers.
deborah grabien - Sep 29, 2004 9:09:26 pm PDT #6894 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Victor, I'll check it out in the morning. Zonked now.
Bev, insending. It's very first-draft stuff, but there's been a bit of revision to the prologue, and I want to know about characters, voice, setting, vivid or not. You know the sort of thing: basic first-read beta.
Beverly - Sep 29, 2004 9:56:24 pm PDT #6895 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Backflung, Deb. I'm rubbing my hands with anticipation of what's next.
Anne W. - Sep 30, 2004 4:07:24 am PDT #6896 of 10001
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.
Deb, I'd be happy to beta if you'd like another set of eyes to look at the thing.
deborah grabien - Sep 30, 2004 7:43:21 am PDT #6897 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Anne, insending.
Susan W. - Sep 30, 2004 7:56:07 am PDT #6898 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights
deb, insent
deborah grabien - Sep 30, 2004 8:05:18 am PDT #6899 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Got it! Thanks, Susan. Sending back.
Lordy, someone write something. I feel like a threadjacker.
victor infante - Sep 30, 2004 8:13:58 am PDT #6900 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.
Lordy, someone write something. I feel like a threadjacker.
I'm working on a poem, which is actually part of the novel, but it ain't anywhere near done yet. It's in my head, but it's doing that rattling at the cages thing.
Will post if I ever finish the damn thing.
Other than that, pimping the column, and working on the next one.
But now I have to go to Staples.