The whole earth may be sucked into Hell, and you want my help 'cause your girlfriend's a big ho?

Buffy ,'Chosen'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Liese S. - Sep 07, 2004 7:58:37 am PDT #6421 of 10001
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

Yeah. It's fun. And I thought that "bells" would be limited.


Liese S. - Sep 07, 2004 8:10:47 am PDT #6422 of 10001
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

And you know where this one came from, too? From kat's "what would you write about if you were writing about these school subjects" call for titles for her class project.

I'd said, "My partner, the pyro" for Chemistry, and that got me all nostalgic about my old crush on my lab partner in high school. It was great! I did all the math and he did all the things that involved any sort of danger. We only cleared the classroom once.

Then came the bells topic, and ping! There was the trigger for this memory of an intensely whispered sexually charged conversation between my eighth grade crush and my sophomore crush. Oh, the sweet tingle of adrenaline, the glorious possibilities, the inevitable complete inaction and loss of the moment. Teen angst is the best angst evah!


deborah grabien - Sep 07, 2004 8:26:08 am PDT #6423 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Liese, sounds like I have to take your word for it - I somehow missed most of the usual realities associated with being a teenager, and angst was one of them.

But it sure makes for some good reading.


Pix - Sep 07, 2004 10:17:49 am PDT #6424 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.

a quick, very brief drabble freewrite just to try to get myself back into the thread again...

They ring every 86 minutes. They shriek into the empty halls, a shrill admonition to jump, move, hurry hurry. They drive me into polished bits of time, swift and sleek and sudden. I am whip-toned to them, quivering in their silence, waiting.

Like a horse trained to the gate, I leap forward when I hear the bells.


Beverly - Sep 07, 2004 10:19:54 am PDT #6425 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Ooh, nice, Kristin.


deborah grabien - Sep 07, 2004 2:21:08 pm PDT #6426 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Teacher drabble. Kewl.

For some reason, this category is all about death and dying, for me.

Requiem for my Father

Silence, warmth, darkness. This is the Hawaiian night: something calls sharply, out near Waimeia Canyon. It might be Pele herself, bored with fire, wanting some peace. I wouldn't know; I'm fathoms deep.

But along my nervous system, something is whispering. It takes an unquantifiable time to reach the brain, to declare itself as my father's voice. I'm asleep; he's half a planet away.

The voice reaches my brain, one word: "Goodbye."

I sit upright, unable to breathe, reaching for the phone. As my fingers find it, it rings under my hand.

I already know what I'm about to be told.


§ ita § - Sep 07, 2004 2:29:30 pm PDT #6427 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

Sometimes it's him. Or not him. But it's about him, and the silence is his fault, or her fault, if she did something wrong, was too needy, not beautiful enough, not kind, warm, as funny as other girls.

Sometimes she likes quiet. No books overdue, no bills, no one trying to contract her for more.

She thinks, every now and again, right now, no one wants to say her mother's dead, or that she's won a million dollars, no one's saying they love her, need her, or will never speak to her again.

Sometimes she watches it not ring.


deborah grabien - Sep 07, 2004 2:36:08 pm PDT #6428 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

ita, that's gorgeous, but it's missing a word or two:

"no one is wants to tell her mother's dead"

tell her her mother's dead? tell her that her mother's dead?


Susan W. - Sep 07, 2004 2:37:54 pm PDT #6429 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

The Catholic church a few blocks from our house rings its bells on the hour. They’re soft. I only hear them if I’m outside and the wind is just so. They mark time, but not as I do. The bells aren’t in a hurry. They sanctify the meeting of the eternal and the now, while I measure my life in items crossed off a to-do list. Sometimes when I hear them I pause and think how I must enjoy the now, give thanks for the gifts of late summer and a baby girl’s smile. But it’s only for the moment, and then I am myself again.


§ ita § - Sep 07, 2004 2:39:22 pm PDT #6430 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

Thanks for the catch, deb. I switched verbs, and left pronouns flapping in the wind.