My food is problematic.

River ,'The Message'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Beverly - Sep 06, 2004 6:00:24 pm PDT #6412 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Oh, that's deep and echo-ey, and painful.

I almost hesitate to post mine, it's such a little wispy thing to follow true grief. 'Scuse the nonsense, please.

Alyce thought it must be fairies. She'd only heard the tiny tinkling sound while she fed the birds in the dovecote. This time she planned to see them, if it was fairies, and when she heard the tiny bell, she ran swiftly, quietly as she could in that direction. But after a careful search, she found nothing.

Except the door of the dovecote swinging open where she'd forgotten to latch it, and blood and feathers everywhere. The cat finished washing his paws, blinked at her, and gave a shake to settle his fur. The little bell at his throat tinkled.


deborah grabien - Sep 06, 2004 6:02:40 pm PDT #6413 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

BWAH!

OK, that made me happy.


Beverly - Sep 06, 2004 6:06:50 pm PDT #6414 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Yay!


Gris - Sep 06, 2004 6:17:29 pm PDT #6415 of 10001
Hey. New board.

The wedding bells ring, and I'm suddenly old.

That girl - she's my age. Well, a year older, but not a full year. She's a peer. She's a friend.

She's a wife now.

She's beaming, so beautiful, and he looks so cute. The wonderful couple, with their pink-Beetle-convertible love.

And I'm alone. Listening to the bells, as they ring their goodbyes to my youth, the death knell of my childhood.


deborah grabien - Sep 06, 2004 10:11:34 pm PDT #6416 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Damn, Nova. One of those moments, isn't it?


Liese S. - Sep 07, 2004 5:32:33 am PDT #6417 of 10001
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

a chemistry fantasy

Their golden heads are close together. Their voices are low. Not so low I can't hear them, but I'm invisible, so.

"She was almost...but then she said she was scared!"

"Scared! Of what?"

Of pregnancy, of AIDS, of the loss or gain of your love.

I say, "I wouldn't be scared." They turn and look at me, mouths slightly agape, as my puritan image slowly tarnishes in their eyes.

"What?"

"Well, not for just anyone, but for either of you two, I would."

No, I don't. I don't say anything. I stay invisible. The bell rings. They leave the classroom.


sumi - Sep 07, 2004 7:09:08 am PDT #6418 of 10001
Art Crawl!!!

Wow. This "Bells" topic has been very inspiring.


deborah grabien - Sep 07, 2004 7:15:15 am PDT #6419 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

It's definitely a power topic, isn't it?


sumi - Sep 07, 2004 7:35:08 am PDT #6420 of 10001
Art Crawl!!!

Yes -- I mean the "Looking Down" topic produced lots of great drabbles -- but I am impressed with the speed and quality of the submission for "bells".


Liese S. - Sep 07, 2004 7:58:37 am PDT #6421 of 10001
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

Yeah. It's fun. And I thought that "bells" would be limited.