Now, this would be the perfect time for a swear word.

Kaylee ,'Jaynestown'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


§ ita § - Jul 12, 2004 1:11:04 pm PDT #5661 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

This isn't the first time she's had to exert her power, to put a stop to it before things spin out of control.

The tip of the knife drags just a little as she runs it up and down, leaving perfect parallel lines of almost-broken dry, ashy skin.

The blade knows where it wants to be ? she slows down just below the elbow and smiles.

"You don't hurt me," she says quietly. "I'm in charge now. I hurt you."

She pushes deeper into her forearm and watches the slow motion drip of blood to the cold bathroom tile.


Polter-Cow - Jul 12, 2004 4:26:27 pm PDT #5662 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

Eeeeee. Aaaaugh.

I just submitted "Shopping" to Glimmer Train. I've never submitted anything to a national magazine before. Time to start collecting rejection letters!


erikaj - Jul 12, 2004 4:28:47 pm PDT #5663 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

They are at least nice when they reject you.


sj - Jul 12, 2004 4:29:47 pm PDT #5664 of 10001
"There are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea."

Go, you P-C! Good for you for having the courage to send it out.


Am-Chau Yarkona - Jul 12, 2004 11:48:26 pm PDT #5665 of 10001
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty

Because I have the sort of mind that wants to try.

110 words total, every word in the list if you count "spinner" as a form of spin. Not very good writing.

- - -

Round and softening, the avocado sits sadly in the waste-land of the dinner table. Once laid to classic, elegant perfection, the diners have been and taken their revenge on the innocent foods, and all is lying in chaos; the withered scraps of winter lettuce—she remembers them in the salad spinner, crunchy and fresh—look like deadbeat seaweed, stranded by a cruel ocean.

The thought of clearing up invites procrastination. The gloaming of the evening is awash with anhedonia. She rolls the uneaten avocado, now overripe, and sends it caroming into a bowl decorated with geckos. The dinner is finished, and the guests have wandered off to absorb their revenges.


Amy - Jul 13, 2004 4:59:51 am PDT #5666 of 10001
Because books.

Way to go, P-C! All fingers crossed.

Great challenge, Steph. I love stuff like this--if I can manage it, I want to get all the words in.

Am-Chau, yours is wonderful--I love how you worked in words in unexpected places, like the bowl "decorated with geckos". Very cool.


Steph L. - Jul 13, 2004 5:10:23 am PDT #5667 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism

Great challenge, Steph. I love stuff like this--if I can manage it, I want to get all the words in.

It is utterly hysterical in my class when we have 20+ random and bizarre words and 10 minutes to use them all in a piece. When we read them out loud, it's better than Last Comic Standing.


Lilty Cash - Jul 13, 2004 5:15:12 am PDT #5668 of 10001
"You see? THAT's what they want. Love, and a bit with a dog."

Rock on, P-C!!!


Amy - Jul 13, 2004 5:19:45 am PDT #5669 of 10001
Because books.

It's a little bit like Mad Libs, but backwards.

I was giggling over the "fur pie" story all night.


Steph L. - Jul 13, 2004 5:21:45 am PDT #5670 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism

I was giggling over the "fur pie" story all night.

Oh, you should have seen my class! We were howling with laughter at "furp-ee?"