ita, Jewish wedding aftermath? With the stomped-on for happiness glass?
These are stone killers, little man. They ain't cuddly like me.
Jayne ,'The Train Job'
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deborah grabien - Jul 01, 2004 8:57:23 am PDT #5531 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
§ ita § - Jul 01, 2004 8:59:03 am PDT #5532 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.
Yup.
deborah grabien - Jul 01, 2004 9:04:54 am PDT #5533 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
That's what I thought. Incredibly vivid, there.
§ ita § - Jul 01, 2004 9:07:54 am PDT #5534 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.
Thank you!
deborah grabien - Jul 01, 2004 9:13:01 am PDT #5535 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Boot's on the other foot, there, love. You made me happy as hell, with that piece.
Reaction ties into my current frustration in Literary. I ought to have a teeshirt made up, or a forehead tat: "Just Tell Me A Fucking STORY!"
§ ita § - Jul 01, 2004 10:55:27 am PDT #5536 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.
More happy glass:
Ugh. Another one who just couldn't pause to savour the journey, just blasting full bore to get the almighty end.
Oh, he's not going to end up where he thinks. And he's not getting anywhere except on her schedule.
But he doesn't need to know that now. He'll sulk.
Bash. Smash. Crash. Even as time telescopes for her, every second made hours, she's not satisfied.
He rushes for her again. She grabs, twists and he's thrown through the plate glass.
In an instant she's standing, smiling on the jagged sill.
"We can take this to the ground, if you like."
deborah grabien - Jul 01, 2004 10:57:39 am PDT #5537 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
MuHA! Loving that one, as well.
Constructive destruction!
(back to my Famous Flower pass-pages)
§ ita § - Jul 01, 2004 11:40:06 am PDT #5538 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.
She strained a little to see his approach, twisting so that the silk was taut against her wrists, but not biting.
She envied him his shirt a moment - the room was cool, chilling her no matter how she tried to push herself deeper into the mattress.
"I told you not to struggle." His eyes were stern. "Look what you did."
His right hand held a shard of the vase, his left lay on her bare stomach.
She closed her eyes and felt narrow pressure tease along her arm.
"Sorry."
It was sharper now, on the cusp of pain.
"Sorry, master."
deborah grabien - Jul 01, 2004 11:55:46 am PDT #5539 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
ita's on my turf! Whooo!
It's a fun, fun patch to write, isn't it?
(taking two minutes away from pass pages. Must take breaks...)
Steph L. - Jul 01, 2004 11:56:45 am PDT #5540 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism
And I can see that ita has taken the make-Steph-go-"meep!" baton from Deb....