That's my girl... That's my good girl.

Kaylee ,'Serenity'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Steph L. - Jul 01, 2004 11:56:45 am PDT #5540 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism

And I can see that ita has taken the make-Steph-go-"meep!" baton from Deb....


deborah grabien - Jul 01, 2004 12:00:18 pm PDT #5541 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Don't worry, girlfriend, this is track relay. I'll get it back shortly.


Sean K - Jul 01, 2004 12:39:49 pm PDT #5542 of 10001
You can't leave me to my own devices; my devices are Nap and Eat. -Zenkitty

Detritus

He opens the door to the apartment for the first time since the fight three days ago. The shards of the shattered mirror still lie scattered on the floor of the living room, crunching under his shoes as he enters. She hasn't been back either.

The walls still seem to hold the echoes of their shouts. He replays the argument in his head as he crosses the room, coming to understand that even love isn't always enough. In the bedroom, half the drawers are open and empty. The closet has been rifled through for choice items, but the rest has been left for some other time.

He collects his own clothes, his toothbrush, the framed picture of the view from their hotel room in Maui, and walks out of the apartment for the last time, over the cracked detritus of their lives.


deborah grabien - Jul 01, 2004 12:41:10 pm PDT #5543 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Sean, whoa. That's scary and spot-on.


Sean K - Jul 01, 2004 12:51:58 pm PDT #5544 of 10001
You can't leave me to my own devices; my devices are Nap and Eat. -Zenkitty

Thanks, Deb!

I gotta go post it in LJ, and to the GWW community.


erikaj - Jul 01, 2004 12:54:03 pm PDT #5545 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Good one, Sean.


Polter-Cow - Jul 01, 2004 1:23:48 pm PDT #5546 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

Sean, dude!

(Okay, that was actually an amusing reference for my own sake in addition to being a compliment.)


Sean K - Jul 01, 2004 1:36:14 pm PDT #5547 of 10001
You can't leave me to my own devices; my devices are Nap and Eat. -Zenkitty

Thanks erika, P-C!


erikaj - Jul 01, 2004 2:59:30 pm PDT #5548 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

One of my stories got rejected...I know it was probably competitive and maybe they had some kick-ass stories show up. I don't doubt...but that really was about my best work at this minute...I don't know what you do when your best is not good enough.


Polter-Cow - Jul 01, 2004 3:00:20 pm PDT #5549 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

Aargh! {{erika}} I hate that feeling.