The money was too good. I got stupid.

Jayne ,'Ariel'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


deborah grabien - Jun 23, 2004 9:20:12 am PDT #5416 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Oh, excellent! There's something incredibly dense, thick I think, about the silence in a place that is accustomed to huge bursts of sound from large groups of people.


Connie Neil - Jun 23, 2004 9:38:14 am PDT #5417 of 10001
brillig

My Last Visit To My Childhood Home

Crickets. Bobwhites farther back in the trees. A whippoorwill sounding as sleepy as me. Occasional frogs down by the creek.

Terrifying.

I've lived in cities for the past ten years. The nightsilence of my country childhood is no longer comforting. The traffic, distant TVs, late-night voices reassure me that the world continues unchanged.

Faint rustle of leaves in the light breeze. Tree branches scraping familiar paths on the roof. Same old bed gives same old creak as I roll over.

Two barks from the dog, who should be asleep.

Me, wide-eyed and motionless, till dawn.


Pix - Jun 23, 2004 9:43:53 am PDT #5418 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.

Deb, yes! Dense is exactly the word to use to describe that kind of silence

Connie, I love your last line. It brings that piece together so perfectly. I also love the details of the leaves, the branches, the bed creaking, the dog barking. Wonderful!

I had a similar experience when we moved last year from a fairly busy suburban condo area to the middle of the forest--ironically, next door to my childhood home. Even though it was so familiar, it took ages to adjust. Now, I love it again and am completely comfortable in it, but I remember the first few nights, alone and terrified.

I also adore the word "nightsilence".


Connie Neil - Jun 23, 2004 10:07:17 am PDT #5419 of 10001
brillig

I spent twenty years in that room, learning the noises the country night made and thinking of them as home. Only took ten years to undo all that. I'm a city person now.

I miss lightning bugs, though.


Polter-Cow - Jun 23, 2004 10:09:24 am PDT #5420 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

I miss lightning bugs, though.

Aww. There aren't enough people who call them lightning bugs. I was young and in Pittsburgh. Haven't seen them since, I don't think.


Connie Neil - Jun 23, 2004 10:14:10 am PDT #5421 of 10001
brillig

I was young and in Pittsburgh

I was young and in Greene County, Pennsylvania, 60 miles south of Pittsburgh. Is it that much of a regionalism?


Beverly - Jun 23, 2004 10:17:42 am PDT #5422 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Lightning bugs in NC, too. Anybody who grew up calling them glow worms? I had no idea they and fireflies and lightning bugs were all the same insect.

I'm loving the silence drabbles. Mine won't jell, but it's working itself out.


Pix - Jun 23, 2004 11:36:15 am PDT #5423 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.

I call them lightning bugs and fireflies. I don't know why--both names seem to be common in this area.

ooo....they would be a great drabble topic....hint, hint...

Off to have the BEST LOBSTAH EVAH.

I love New England.


§ ita § - Jun 23, 2004 11:55:17 am PDT #5424 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

We call them peeniewallies.


sumi - Jun 23, 2004 12:07:47 pm PDT #5425 of 10001
Art Crawl!!!

I miss hearing bobwhites.