'Dear Diary, Today I was pompous and my sister was crazy.' 'Today, we were kidnapped by hill folk never to be seen again. It was the best day ever.'

Jayne ,'Safe'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Pix - Jun 23, 2004 9:43:53 am PDT #5418 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.

Deb, yes! Dense is exactly the word to use to describe that kind of silence

Connie, I love your last line. It brings that piece together so perfectly. I also love the details of the leaves, the branches, the bed creaking, the dog barking. Wonderful!

I had a similar experience when we moved last year from a fairly busy suburban condo area to the middle of the forest--ironically, next door to my childhood home. Even though it was so familiar, it took ages to adjust. Now, I love it again and am completely comfortable in it, but I remember the first few nights, alone and terrified.

I also adore the word "nightsilence".


Connie Neil - Jun 23, 2004 10:07:17 am PDT #5419 of 10001
brillig

I spent twenty years in that room, learning the noises the country night made and thinking of them as home. Only took ten years to undo all that. I'm a city person now.

I miss lightning bugs, though.


Polter-Cow - Jun 23, 2004 10:09:24 am PDT #5420 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

I miss lightning bugs, though.

Aww. There aren't enough people who call them lightning bugs. I was young and in Pittsburgh. Haven't seen them since, I don't think.


Connie Neil - Jun 23, 2004 10:14:10 am PDT #5421 of 10001
brillig

I was young and in Pittsburgh

I was young and in Greene County, Pennsylvania, 60 miles south of Pittsburgh. Is it that much of a regionalism?


Beverly - Jun 23, 2004 10:17:42 am PDT #5422 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Lightning bugs in NC, too. Anybody who grew up calling them glow worms? I had no idea they and fireflies and lightning bugs were all the same insect.

I'm loving the silence drabbles. Mine won't jell, but it's working itself out.


Pix - Jun 23, 2004 11:36:15 am PDT #5423 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.

I call them lightning bugs and fireflies. I don't know why--both names seem to be common in this area.

ooo....they would be a great drabble topic....hint, hint...

Off to have the BEST LOBSTAH EVAH.

I love New England.


§ ita § - Jun 23, 2004 11:55:17 am PDT #5424 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

We call them peeniewallies.


sumi - Jun 23, 2004 12:07:47 pm PDT #5425 of 10001
Art Crawl!!!

I miss hearing bobwhites.


Connie Neil - Jun 23, 2004 12:11:42 pm PDT #5426 of 10001
brillig

Birds with something to say, yeah. Whippoorwills.

Peeniewallies? I disbelieve.


erikaj - Jun 23, 2004 12:12:30 pm PDT #5427 of 10001
"Somewhere in this building is our talent." Toby Ziegler, my spirit animal

When I was a kid, we had an aviary and had a pair of them. I loved to watch them and listen to the calling. But of course, I didn't have to go to work so the birds getting started early didn't bother me like my parents.