Angel: Is that what you think you are--a hero? Spike: Saved the world didn't I? Angel: Once. Talk to me after you've done it a couple more times.

'Destiny'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


deborah grabien - Jun 22, 2004 7:03:17 am PDT #5397 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

This challenge topic is already crystallising into something really interesting to me: a study in comparative sizing. Silence is either huge, an enormous empty devouring thing, or else its deeply small and personalised.

I wonder if a challenge on noise would break down the same way?


erikaj - Jun 22, 2004 7:09:13 am PDT #5398 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

La Tep,c'est moi. I think partially it's cause my dad can click out and still be in the room with you...and even as I post it, I feel y'all going "Again with her Dad Issues...son of a...spank your inner moppet and get on with it."


deborah grabien - Jun 22, 2004 11:43:39 am PDT #5399 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

In other news?

I finished "Matty Groves."

Done. Finis. My house is untenanted for a few hours.

83,000 words or so. 350-plus manuscript pages.

Done.

Betas? Anyone want to read a novel from top to bottom and tell me what you think?


erikaj - Jun 22, 2004 11:50:11 am PDT #5400 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

I'd be happy to look at it... I have a question for people here. Every time I write something, unless it's really short, I have trouble deciding what verb tenses to use and change my mind several times. How do you decide? Why?


deborah grabien - Jun 22, 2004 11:55:14 am PDT #5401 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

I don't know, erika - tense is one of those things that come automatically to me. I go by feel, the feel of the piece.

But I'm good at tense correcting (grinning).

I'll e you the manuscript. I need to know if it hangs together, how the pacing works, anything that glaringly contradicts anything else, whether the bits are sufficiently tied together at the book's end, etc.

I'm too close to it, and will be for about ten days to two weeks.

So I loves me my beta readers.


Polter-Cow - Jun 22, 2004 11:56:44 am PDT #5402 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

Every time I write something, unless it's really short, I have trouble deciding what verb tenses to use and change my mind several times. How do you decide? Why?

My answer to everything is, "That's how it comes to me." If I feel like when I'm writing, I'm there, I use present tense, but if I feel like I'm more telling a story that's already happened, I go past. This isn't helpful at all.


Connie Neil - Jun 22, 2004 11:58:03 am PDT #5403 of 10001
brillig

I know which tense sounds right, but I couldn't name you the types of tenses under threat of hot pokers. (what the hell is pluperfect, anyway?) I have to play the sentence over in my head to which plays best if I have any doubt.

Tenses have to do with time, don't they?


erikaj - Jun 22, 2004 12:04:10 pm PDT #5404 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

ok.I'm looking forward to it. I just wondered if there were things people considered...I may just pick present cause that's where it started. Or, past is traditional for a reason...


Tal - Jun 22, 2004 12:04:17 pm PDT #5405 of 10001

yep


sumi - Jun 22, 2004 12:05:37 pm PDT #5406 of 10001
Art Crawl!!!

Wow! Woo hoo for being done.