I always thought the name Serenity had a vaguely funereal sound to it.

Simon ,'Out Of Gas'


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Amy - Jun 07, 2004 7:02:18 pm PDT #5128 of 10001
Because books.

I think I more delivered anti-porn

I guess my mind just went to where the cucumbers and bananas were leading... Oh, dear. Loved it either way.

Really, truly in bed now.


deborah grabien - Jun 07, 2004 9:35:05 pm PDT #5129 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Oh, I *knew* where ita's was going! And I love Kristin's.

Someone said porn?

Summer Game

"Tell me what this is."

She adjusts her senses, those she can actually use; the blindfold is soft, blocking out all but stray darts of diffused light.

"Strawberry."

"Very good." He lets her nibble a bit. "What's this, then?"

Hot, heady, the stuff summer is made of. "Peach," she says dreamily, and licks juice from the overripe globe.

"Right," he says," one more to go."

Vagrant, sweet, tantalising, the scent dances away from her memory banks. "Um - canteloupe?"

"Bad girl. Try again."

"Honeydew!"

"Honeydew it is," he says, and moves the fruit out of reach, to kiss her instead.


erikaj - Jun 08, 2004 10:30:25 am PDT #5130 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

wow, did this come out smutty...
Watermelon

There is something almost indecent about the first watermelon of the season. It is only a little darker than her tongue and vaguely reminiscent of other places she doesn’t think of at the kitchen table. She swears every time that she will be neat, but the juice gets out of hand every time. It’s the heat. It does that sometimes. Or at least, it’s hard to complain about getting wet. She takes a big bite. And, yet she remembers from biology, that this lovely pink flesh is not the point...it’s there to keep the vine alive. Something seems wrong about that.


deborah grabien - Jun 08, 2004 10:55:56 am PDT #5131 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Oh, my.

You know, Gayle Brandeis wrote a wonderful book called "Fruitflesh". All about women's erotica. Seems a nice bit of synchronicity.


Pix - Jun 08, 2004 11:10:21 am PDT #5132 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.

I immediately thought of The Botany of Desire when I saw the drabble topic.


§ ita § - Jun 08, 2004 4:51:42 pm PDT #5133 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

The unsophisticated Stringy mangoes were the province of the children.

They grow plentiful on large, not easily climbable trees. We pick them by flinging stones and avoid their unsurprisingly fibrous meat by pounding them unpeeled until their flesh is soft pulp, and suck the sunny sweetness through a small hole bitten in the tip. It's neat and efficient, well designed for mango eating competitions of the season. Eat and toss, eat and toss, racing each other and hiccoughing and laughing in the grass.

Time enough to steal a Bombay, East Indian or Julie from our parents when we were done.


§ ita § - Jun 08, 2004 5:02:53 pm PDT #5134 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

My father had first right of refusal to everything from the Bombay tree. I realize in retrospect the symmetry -- it's a firm, neat mango, with a subtle and refined taste.

The tree is gone now, for practical reasons. Back then we could pick its fruit standing on the roof, and take it downstairs. A careful slice around its equator, a deft twist and the seed popped out, leaving you with two mango cups, lacking only ice cream.

He's a pragmatic man, only lately come to sentimentality. I wonder if he can miss the tree as much as I do.


Pix - Jun 08, 2004 5:09:21 pm PDT #5135 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.

ita, you're on fire with this drabble topic!

t not here. really not here


Polter-Cow - Jun 08, 2004 5:13:16 pm PDT #5136 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

ita, you're very good.


§ ita § - Jun 08, 2004 5:18:56 pm PDT #5137 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

(one more) (thanks guys)

The best tree to climb was the Julie. It arched out more than it reached upwards, with branches more than wide enough for a diminutive child to sit and read, or pretend she was a lurking assassin.

I didn't climb for the mangoes - I climbed for the climb - to pretend I was somewhere else, born to a life wilder, of the jungle, or more refined, of English countryside.

And when I got distracted (because I always did) I became me again - slightly lazy, slightly disrespectful, definitely larcenous. They weren't mine to eat, but my mother wasn't watching, and I did.