This isn't a come-on. I'm in a very serious relationship with a landscape architect.

Oliver ,'Conviction (1)'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Pix - Jun 08, 2004 11:10:21 am PDT #5132 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.

I immediately thought of The Botany of Desire when I saw the drabble topic.


§ ita § - Jun 08, 2004 4:51:42 pm PDT #5133 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

The unsophisticated Stringy mangoes were the province of the children.

They grow plentiful on large, not easily climbable trees. We pick them by flinging stones and avoid their unsurprisingly fibrous meat by pounding them unpeeled until their flesh is soft pulp, and suck the sunny sweetness through a small hole bitten in the tip. It's neat and efficient, well designed for mango eating competitions of the season. Eat and toss, eat and toss, racing each other and hiccoughing and laughing in the grass.

Time enough to steal a Bombay, East Indian or Julie from our parents when we were done.


§ ita § - Jun 08, 2004 5:02:53 pm PDT #5134 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

My father had first right of refusal to everything from the Bombay tree. I realize in retrospect the symmetry -- it's a firm, neat mango, with a subtle and refined taste.

The tree is gone now, for practical reasons. Back then we could pick its fruit standing on the roof, and take it downstairs. A careful slice around its equator, a deft twist and the seed popped out, leaving you with two mango cups, lacking only ice cream.

He's a pragmatic man, only lately come to sentimentality. I wonder if he can miss the tree as much as I do.


Pix - Jun 08, 2004 5:09:21 pm PDT #5135 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.

ita, you're on fire with this drabble topic!

t not here. really not here


Polter-Cow - Jun 08, 2004 5:13:16 pm PDT #5136 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

ita, you're very good.


§ ita § - Jun 08, 2004 5:18:56 pm PDT #5137 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

(one more) (thanks guys)

The best tree to climb was the Julie. It arched out more than it reached upwards, with branches more than wide enough for a diminutive child to sit and read, or pretend she was a lurking assassin.

I didn't climb for the mangoes - I climbed for the climb - to pretend I was somewhere else, born to a life wilder, of the jungle, or more refined, of English countryside.

And when I got distracted (because I always did) I became me again - slightly lazy, slightly disrespectful, definitely larcenous. They weren't mine to eat, but my mother wasn't watching, and I did.


Polter-Cow - Jun 08, 2004 5:20:20 pm PDT #5138 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

Have you read Jamaica Kincaid's "Girl"? For some reason I keep thinking of it while reading your drabbles.


deborah grabien - Jun 08, 2004 5:22:54 pm PDT #5139 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

ita has a habit of making me wonder whether I colour my memories of the Caribbean too highly.

She also has the habit of answering the question for me. No. I don't.

Brava, love. Those are wonderful.


Deena - Jun 08, 2004 5:44:33 pm PDT #5140 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

Ah, those are amazing, ita.

I'm going to have to think about this one. Nothing's happening yet. Maybe tomorrow.


Beverly - Jun 08, 2004 7:10:53 pm PDT #5141 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

ita. I can smell the salt in the air and feel the sweet juice drying sticky on my skin. Lovely.

God knows they'd tried. The best preschools, the best schools. Enrollment in an ivy league university as soon as the ultrasound confirmed the sex.

Her own room, shell pink with icing-white woodwork, an antique crib and matching low chest. They'd had a custom pad made to turn the chest into a changing table, the crib bars reset to conform to modern standards. Later, there was an antique tester with a canopy, an Aubusson, couturier clothes, tasteful jewelry.

The product of their love, their plans, their hopes faced them now, hair dyed blue, nose pierced, belly bulging round as a melon.