This here's a recipe for unpleasantness.

Mal ,'Objects In Space'


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A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


deborah grabien - Jun 01, 2004 2:20:21 pm PDT #4932 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

I love "a relationship not worth the vinyl of someone else's album."

I keep forgetting how personal some of these drabbles are. Thing is, his band had an album come out at right around the same time (the man in the drabble, that is), but all I can remember is Blue, when I think about that particular kick in the gut.

He's also the gent in the feather drabble. Way more than I could handle, back in the day. But an education...


§ ita § - Jun 01, 2004 3:13:01 pm PDT #4933 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

To Joyce:

She remembers being accused of showing doctored photographs and she laughs. There isn't anything you can do to a picture to make it close. No colour shifts, no dodging nor burning can tell you how warm it is, or how cool, or how clear and sparkling and everchanging.

There's no breeze in a photograph, no bracing smell, no calming noises. Fish can't nibble your back then scatter in shards of light. The sand can't spill through your toes.

He tilts the catamaran, and she laughs, dipping her head back into the crystal spray.

Blue is merely where the Caribbean starts.


Pix - Jun 01, 2004 7:29:41 pm PDT #4934 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.

God are these drabbles good this week. Seriously, folks.


deborah grabien - Jun 01, 2004 9:10:32 pm PDT #4935 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

ita has me remebering scuba diving off Grand Bahama, and Montserrat before the volcano blew, when Air Studios wasn't buried under thirty feet of ash.

Damn it.


Susan W. - Jun 02, 2004 5:34:31 am PDT #4936 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

An attempt to drabble....

I almost have my father's eyes. The shape is there, the dark clarity, and the way they're set into a prominent bone structure. Even the nearsightedness--that comes from him.

But not the color. I am not blue-eyed. Specifically, I do not have eyes of a near-sapphire hue rarely seen outside of Mary Sue fanfic.

Yesterday my daughter's eyes, which had lingered in indistinct newborn gray for nearly two months, suddenly began to well up with brown. She will have lovely eyes. But now I know they won't be my father's.


§ ita § - Jun 02, 2004 7:37:57 am PDT #4937 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

I think know when I got this one. It might have been that right hook in the second round, if it skipped off my orbital bone on the way to my nose. He apologized profusely for his sloppiness, but knowing I only had twenty seconds more sparring before the nosebleed became problematic meant any forgiveness would need to wait until after I'd kicked his ass.

I thought no more of it, dabbing my nose by rote while I watched the lucky non-bleeders keep fighting, until the wiseass yelled from the door.

"Makeup again?"

Closest to blue eyeshadow I ever get.


deborah grabien - Jun 02, 2004 7:45:46 am PDT #4938 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

ita, good one. But there's a missing word, alas:

if it skipped off my orbital bone as it on the way to my nose.

as it what on the way to your nose?


§ ita § - Jun 02, 2004 7:47:55 am PDT #4939 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

Actually, it's not a missing word, so much as two unremoved ones.

Will edit.


deborah grabien - Jun 02, 2004 7:49:42 am PDT #4940 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Thankee, ma'am.

Because yours are smoothly crafted enough so that a hiccough makes me blink.


Jesse - Jun 02, 2004 7:50:52 am PDT #4941 of 10001
Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be.

Blue is merely where the Caribbean starts.

I will use this line as a jumping-off point for a little anecdote in which I am a freaking idiot. I saw the theme and was thinking, "Man, I just saw some gorgeous aqua water. That would be cool. Where was that, again?" Oh, right. Off Greece/Troy. At the movies. Der.