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A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Susan W. - Jun 02, 2004 5:34:31 am PDT #4936 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

An attempt to drabble....

I almost have my father's eyes. The shape is there, the dark clarity, and the way they're set into a prominent bone structure. Even the nearsightedness--that comes from him.

But not the color. I am not blue-eyed. Specifically, I do not have eyes of a near-sapphire hue rarely seen outside of Mary Sue fanfic.

Yesterday my daughter's eyes, which had lingered in indistinct newborn gray for nearly two months, suddenly began to well up with brown. She will have lovely eyes. But now I know they won't be my father's.


§ ita § - Jun 02, 2004 7:37:57 am PDT #4937 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

I think know when I got this one. It might have been that right hook in the second round, if it skipped off my orbital bone on the way to my nose. He apologized profusely for his sloppiness, but knowing I only had twenty seconds more sparring before the nosebleed became problematic meant any forgiveness would need to wait until after I'd kicked his ass.

I thought no more of it, dabbing my nose by rote while I watched the lucky non-bleeders keep fighting, until the wiseass yelled from the door.

"Makeup again?"

Closest to blue eyeshadow I ever get.


deborah grabien - Jun 02, 2004 7:45:46 am PDT #4938 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

ita, good one. But there's a missing word, alas:

if it skipped off my orbital bone as it on the way to my nose.

as it what on the way to your nose?


§ ita § - Jun 02, 2004 7:47:55 am PDT #4939 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

Actually, it's not a missing word, so much as two unremoved ones.

Will edit.


deborah grabien - Jun 02, 2004 7:49:42 am PDT #4940 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Thankee, ma'am.

Because yours are smoothly crafted enough so that a hiccough makes me blink.


Jesse - Jun 02, 2004 7:50:52 am PDT #4941 of 10001
Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be.

Blue is merely where the Caribbean starts.

I will use this line as a jumping-off point for a little anecdote in which I am a freaking idiot. I saw the theme and was thinking, "Man, I just saw some gorgeous aqua water. That would be cool. Where was that, again?" Oh, right. Off Greece/Troy. At the movies. Der.


Connie Neil - Jun 02, 2004 7:55:35 am PDT #4942 of 10001
brillig

Whenever I see shows set in Greece, my mind always insists that they're using some sort of filter, because no water could possibly be that blue in truth. Never having been and being unlikely to ever see Greece, are the pictures true?


§ ita § - Jun 02, 2004 7:57:34 am PDT #4943 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

Never having been and being unlikely to ever see Greece, are the pictures true?

As someone who has been accused of showing doctored photos, sure. Mediterranean does it off a number of countries, the Caribbean does it most everywhere, the Pacific is wont to do it from time to time.


deborah grabien - Jun 02, 2004 7:57:52 am PDT #4944 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Never having been and being unlikely to ever see Greece, are the pictures true?

Depends where in Greece you are. When I've been on the mainland, I tend toward inland. But the water off the islands - Corfu, Crete et al - is just about that blue, or was, the last time I was in Greece.

crosspost with ita. The Caribbean is extremely blue too, especially a ways offshore, at least from the Bahamas.


Connie Neil - Jun 02, 2004 8:00:11 am PDT #4945 of 10001
brillig

Mediterranean does it off a number of countries, the Caribbean does it most everywhere, the Pacific is wont to do it from time to time.

Sigh. t gazes at mountains just outside the window I do love the mountains, I do. But, goddess, I miss the sea.