Nilly, sent, of course. I got some great feedback - Kristin, P-C, Dana, everyone who read it had points to make, and every last point merited some serious consideration. I love beta readers....
It's all about choices, Faith. The ones we make, and the ones we don't. Oh, and the consequences. Those are always fun.
Angelus ,'Smile Time'
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deborah grabien - May 20, 2004 6:32:43 am PDT #4772 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
victor infante - May 20, 2004 2:40:50 pm PDT #4773 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.
Deb, I owe you an apology. Haven't gotten to story yet--got sidetracked that night, and have been swamped since.
Will get to soon. WANT! READ! CLOWNS!
deborah grabien - May 20, 2004 3:07:41 pm PDT #4774 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Victor, I'd have thought you were still reeling from a certain Poetry Slam last night....
victor infante - May 20, 2004 3:11:51 pm PDT #4775 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.
Victor, I'd have thought you were still reeling from a certain Poetry Slam last night....
I laughed my ass off, and snapped my fingers Chicago-style.
But more than that, alas, is spoilery for this thread.
deborah grabien - May 20, 2004 3:13:53 pm PDT #4776 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Exactly. Hence my complete and utter lack of specificity.
Heh. Heheheheheh.
victor infante - May 20, 2004 3:16:37 pm PDT #4777 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.
Exactly. Hence my complete and utter lack of specificity.
Heh. Insent.
deborah grabien - May 20, 2004 3:20:26 pm PDT #4778 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Backflung, with snortage and much agreement.
Connie Neil - May 20, 2004 3:31:48 pm PDT #4779 of 10001
brillig
There should have been lighters. At the slam.
Nilly - May 20, 2004 9:56:07 pm PDT #4780 of 10001
Swouncing
deb, I didn't get anything (I only now got to re-check my e-mail account, which apparently doesn't want us to read each other, the meanie).
I'm afraid I'm not going to be here long today, and then I'm off for the weekend and you're off to DC (right?), but I do hope I'll get to not only read it, but also be able to provide you some feedback on time.
deborah grabien - May 21, 2004 5:29:50 am PDT #4781 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Nilly, I'll try resending, but don't rush it - Mike Brotherton and Jay Lake, the editors, have it, because there was a deadline. So, for enjoyment only.