Ah, yes, of course. The gypsies, they gave you your soul. The gypsies are filthy people. Ptui! We shall speak of them no more.

Ilona Costa Bianchi ,'The Girl in Question'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


dcp - May 18, 2004 9:39:52 pm PDT #4743 of 10001
The more I learn, the more I realize how little I know.

Hah. I did a triple take on eight-not-eighty.


Gris - May 18, 2004 9:45:35 pm PDT #4744 of 10001
Hey. New board.

Hair-fetishist me wrote this drabble:

When I was in high school, I usually sat behind Lauren. Lauren had nice hair. And she'd let me play. She'd let me braid.

A braid is a fascinating knot, an artistic knot. Right-over, left-over, right-over, left, with an orderly, aesthetic result. I'd braid and comb out, for hours on end, my hands, my eyes, and my mind all employed in the tying of my artistic knots. A guilty pleasure.

Now, when I'm in class, I remember braiding. I remember my friend, who let me tie up her hair in my inexpert knots, because, against all odds, she loved me.


Connie Neil - May 18, 2004 9:47:51 pm PDT #4745 of 10001
brillig

Yay, the eight-year-old lace maker! I do bobbin lace as well, and I was thinking of doing something with lace for this drabble.


Beverly - May 18, 2004 9:57:19 pm PDT #4746 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

My lacemaker came from a photo, years ago, in an article on Brussels lace in Victoria magazine. She sat, in her velvet dress with its lace collar, her hair done up in French braids, her face a study in concentration.

I really wanted to do one about eight-year-old and younger rugmakers in the near east. I may still do.


Pix - May 19, 2004 2:26:03 am PDT #4747 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.

Deb, glad it was helpful--I can't check my home email until tonight though, so if you want to email me between now and then (or to know what your response was last night, which I haven't read), try my work email: ktaylor at waterfordschools dot org

I adore the drabbles from last night. Gorgeous, moving, and different!


Lilty Cash - May 19, 2004 5:31:31 am PDT #4748 of 10001
"You see? THAT's what they want. Love, and a bit with a dog."

Delurking in this thread with my first drabble....

The woman told me to tie the knots tightly, holding my wishes in my mind as I formed each one. The string would fall off my wrist, and when it did, the things I sought would find me.

That was a month ago. The knots at my hand have grown dirty, started to smell of chlorine and cigarette smoke. They are brownish-gray, but tightly knotted as ever. It’s time to cut them off, before they sink right into my skin.

I reach for the scissors, and the string catches and pulls on the handle of the drawer. It pops, and my wrist is free. As I rub it, I sit, and I wait.


Polter-Cow - May 19, 2004 5:37:56 am PDT #4749 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

Frou Frou, Christopher Pike, and a good writer?

What is this based on? I assume it's an actual practice, but I haven't heard of it. I like how the string accidentally comes off. It actually sounds like the basis for a great story.


Dana - May 19, 2004 5:38:51 am PDT #4750 of 10001
I'm terrifically busy with my ennui.

Deb, I can beta today.


Lilty Cash - May 19, 2004 5:46:16 am PDT #4751 of 10001
"You see? THAT's what they want. Love, and a bit with a dog."

What is this based on? I assume it's an actual practice, but I haven't heard of it. I like how the string accidentally comes off. It actually sounds like the basis for a great story.

I remember new age-y shops used to sell these bracelets with certain intentions: money, love, etc., that you'd tie on, and you'd get it when it fell off. But last year during playoff season, I read an article saying to tie a yellow string in 3 knots while repeating some phrase to dispel the Curse of The Bambino so the Sox would win the series. Not that I did it, or anything.


deborah grabien - May 19, 2004 6:57:08 am PDT #4752 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

(poking head in briefly)

Dear beta readers: OK. I am down to the last couple of pages; we're at the circus and major major shit is about to start. Shall I send what I have, or wait?