Delurking in this thread with my first drabble....
The woman told me to tie the knots tightly, holding my wishes in my mind as I formed each one. The string would fall off my wrist, and when it did, the things I sought would find me.
That was a month ago. The knots at my hand have grown dirty, started to smell of chlorine and cigarette smoke. They are brownish-gray, but tightly knotted as ever. It’s time to cut them off, before they sink right into my skin.
I reach for the scissors, and the string catches and pulls on the handle of the drawer. It pops, and my wrist is free. As I rub it, I sit, and I wait.
Frou Frou, Christopher Pike, and a good writer?
What is this based on? I assume it's an actual practice, but I haven't heard of it. I like how the string accidentally comes off. It actually sounds like the basis for a great story.
What is this based on? I assume it's an actual practice, but I haven't heard of it. I like how the string accidentally comes off. It actually sounds like the basis for a great story.
I remember new age-y shops used to sell these bracelets with certain intentions: money, love, etc., that you'd tie on, and you'd get it when it fell off. But last year during playoff season, I read an article saying to tie a yellow string in 3 knots while repeating some phrase to dispel the Curse of The Bambino so the Sox would win the series. Not that I did it, or anything.
(poking head in briefly)
Dear beta readers: OK. I am down to the last couple of pages; we're at the circus and major major shit is about to start. Shall I send what I have, or wait?
Deb, wait as far as I'm concerned. I won't be able to beta for you until tonight anyway, alas, so I'd rather see the whole thing.
I'm with Kristin. Especially cause if you go ahead and finish it, I get to not open my response to you with cursing.
Why? :)
But we're married...she knows I talk like that.
Gronk gronk gronk.
Clowns?
DONE. Sent to Dana, Bev, sj, Ginger, P-C and Kristin at profile addys.
I go clean house now. I didn't even spellcheck or reread a word of the last section. As a whole, the story may suck. But I don't think it does.
Surprise ending, BTW. Twisty.
t resists urge to skip right to end