Wooooooeeeee.
Victor, as a middle-aged woman? May I just say, that piece is killer.
Can't you ever get your mind out of the hellmouth?
Buffy ,'Touched'
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deborah grabien - Apr 19, 2004 9:52:21 am PDT #4052 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
victor infante - Apr 19, 2004 9:58:14 am PDT #4053 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.
Victor, as a middle-aged woman? May I just say, that piece is killer.
Thanks, Deb. Sometimes I write these things,and have no idea what to make of them.
erikaj - Apr 19, 2004 10:20:23 am PDT #4054 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!
Uh, I think I would take it to my bunk...
Strix - Apr 19, 2004 10:32:32 am PDT #4055 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
Oh, Victor, NICE.
Sometimes you don't need to make anything of them; you just need to make them.
victor infante - Apr 19, 2004 11:58:58 am PDT #4056 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.
Thanks, all. Glad to know I'm on the right track with it.
I think what my question is, is do I need to paint in some picture of what's gained from fidelity? Is there anyway to do that without moralizing, which I have no interest in doing.
deborah grabien - Apr 19, 2004 12:14:30 pm PDT #4057 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Victor, I don't think so - justification doesn't seem to be the impetus behind the piece.
What you've done is to offer a beautifully written little precis on why temptation is human. And in point of fact? The fact that you aren't taking the girl up on her unspoken invitation is its own justification.
I don't think it needs anything.
victor infante - Apr 19, 2004 12:29:34 pm PDT #4058 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.
I don't think it needs anything.
Hmm. I'm leaning this way myself. Still, worth pondering.
deborah grabien - Apr 19, 2004 12:32:49 pm PDT #4059 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Not necessarily, Victor. You ponder too much, you'll end up overanalysing the thing and bitching it up. Let it be - it's as close to perfect as it gets.
Atropa - Apr 19, 2004 3:06:15 pm PDT #4060 of 10001
The artist formerly associated with cupcakes.
Victor, that piece is stunning.
Because I just skimmed and skimmed and skimmed, are we posting our responses to the drabble challenges here?
Steph L. - Apr 19, 2004 3:17:25 pm PDT #4061 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism
Jilli, you can if you like; I think most people have been, but it's not a requirement.