I won't judge just yet. But nor will I read the rhyming poem about writer's block.
Now, I can hold a note for a long time...actually I can hold a note forever. But eventually that's just noise. It's the change we're listening for. The note coming after, and the one after that. That's what makes it music.
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erikaj - Jan 24, 2004 1:52:07 pm PST #3245 of 10001
"already on the kiss-cam with Karl Marx"-
Deena - Jan 24, 2004 2:11:13 pm PST #3246 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
Deb, that sounds interesting. I'd like to read it when you've had the chance to put them in.
Nilly - Jan 25, 2004 1:14:24 am PST #3247 of 10001
Swouncing
go back and insert a few little bits in "Matty", pointing to echoes that later become louder
deb, I'm actually in the middle of reading it pretty much right now, so if I can offer any help, I'd love to.
deborah grabien - Jan 25, 2004 8:09:57 am PST #3248 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Woof. OK - I did some work yesterday, and added those bits. Want me to send, with explanations?
Actually, I'll just send. WIth explanations. Not awake yet.
deborah grabien - Jan 26, 2004 6:26:12 pm PST #3249 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
HELP.
Any of my beloved beta readers around? I spurted and this is new and spooky (not ghosty, just spooky, I think) and I need a beta...
Deena - Jan 26, 2004 6:26:59 pm PST #3250 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
Deb, I'm here. Shoot it over.
Holli - Jan 26, 2004 6:30:45 pm PST #3251 of 10001
an overblown libretto and a sumptuous score/ could never contain the contradictions I adore
Deb, are you on AIM?
deborah grabien - Jan 26, 2004 6:51:07 pm PST #3252 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Deena, insending.
Holli, I am now...
Deena - Jan 26, 2004 7:08:55 pm PST #3253 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
And returned, Deb.
Susan W. - Jan 26, 2004 7:21:55 pm PST #3254 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights
Today my writers group told me the scene from Anna I brought it was "very visual." That's a first, and something of a triumph. Problem is, it doesn't yet feel like an organic part of my writing. I think, "Oh yeah, there's that visual description thing my betas always say I lack. Should try to put something in. Let's see, what would my POV character be noticing? That the stuffed-shirt lieutenant who'll eventually be the villain of the piece is practically the only person left in the unit wearing a completely regulation uniform, with shiny silver buttons and well-polished boots. OK, I'll describe that, and contrast it to Mr. POV's rather frayed jacket and the boots he looted off a French corpse." And apparently it works, but I have to think about it hard. Dialogue is by far the most natural kind of writing for me, and I can't figure out why, since I'm rather introverted and hardly a witty conversationalist.