Quite possibly, though it's looking like several scenes, maybe as much as two or three chapters worth at this point. I want to have Anna and Jack meet and develop a rapport, then have a few scenes with Anna and her husband that illustrate the tensions in their marriage, maybe another nice friendly scene or two with Jack, and then she gets the word that her husband is dead.
Wesley: We were fighting on opposite sides, but it was the same war. Fred: but you hated her…didn't you? Wesley: It's not always about holding hands.
'Shells'
The Great Write Way
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
Susan W. - Nov 03, 2003 8:48:04 am PST #2590 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights
deborah grabien - Nov 03, 2003 10:31:12 am PST #2591 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Pastoral English County to Be Named Later
It's actually called "Washbasin-on-the-Drainboard" on the OS maps....
deborah grabien - Nov 03, 2003 1:39:38 pm PST #2592 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Anyone around?
I've just written my bio for the launch party announcement, as requested by Ed Kaufman, and it needs some serious beta reading, for tone and clarity.
It's supposed to be longish (he said so - that way, he can chop), and I'm trying for a particular feel.
Susan W. - Nov 03, 2003 1:40:24 pm PST #2593 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights
I'm here, taking posting breaks between mindnumbingly boring work tasks....
Astarte - Nov 03, 2003 1:40:26 pm PST #2594 of 10001
Not having has never been the thing I've regretted most in my life. Not trying is.
I'm here. If you want to send it on profile addy's good.
Betsy HP - Nov 03, 2003 1:41:29 pm PST #2595 of 10001
If I only had a brain...
Send it here, Deb.
deborah grabien - Nov 03, 2003 1:45:12 pm PST #2596 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Sending to all three. Thanks, loves - I need to get this off to Ed within a day or two.
Betsy HP - Nov 03, 2003 2:13:45 pm PST #2597 of 10001
If I only had a brain...
Backsent. Annotations and Track Changes turned on.
I have procrastinated all day. But did I NaNo? No. I procrastinated from BOTH NaNo AND my paid work. Can I achieve a trifecta?
Astarte - Nov 03, 2003 2:23:52 pm PST #2598 of 10001
Not having has never been the thing I've regretted most in my life. Not trying is.
Backflung.
Beverly - Nov 03, 2003 2:29:07 pm PST #2599 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Here, though late, Deb, if you need a fourth.