Lindsey: Why--why did you... Lorne: One last job. You're not part of the solution, Lindsey. You never will be. Lindsey: You kill me? A flunky?! I'm not just...Angel...kills me. You...Angel... Lorne: Good night, folks.

'Not Fade Away'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


deborah grabien - Nov 03, 2003 1:39:38 pm PST #2592 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Anyone around?

I've just written my bio for the launch party announcement, as requested by Ed Kaufman, and it needs some serious beta reading, for tone and clarity.

It's supposed to be longish (he said so - that way, he can chop), and I'm trying for a particular feel.


Susan W. - Nov 03, 2003 1:40:24 pm PST #2593 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

I'm here, taking posting breaks between mindnumbingly boring work tasks....


Astarte - Nov 03, 2003 1:40:26 pm PST #2594 of 10001
Not having has never been the thing I've regretted most in my life. Not trying is.

I'm here. If you want to send it on profile addy's good.


Betsy HP - Nov 03, 2003 1:41:29 pm PST #2595 of 10001
If I only had a brain...

Send it here, Deb.


deborah grabien - Nov 03, 2003 1:45:12 pm PST #2596 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Sending to all three. Thanks, loves - I need to get this off to Ed within a day or two.


Betsy HP - Nov 03, 2003 2:13:45 pm PST #2597 of 10001
If I only had a brain...

Backsent. Annotations and Track Changes turned on.

I have procrastinated all day. But did I NaNo? No. I procrastinated from BOTH NaNo AND my paid work. Can I achieve a trifecta?


Astarte - Nov 03, 2003 2:23:52 pm PST #2598 of 10001
Not having has never been the thing I've regretted most in my life. Not trying is.

Backflung.


Beverly - Nov 03, 2003 2:29:07 pm PST #2599 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Here, though late, Deb, if you need a fourth.


deborah grabien - Nov 03, 2003 2:30:48 pm PST #2600 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Bev, insending. That will make four, and I can balance out with mine.

No one commented on the tone of it. I wanted it a bit ironic and light and amusing. Was that fairly clear?


Liese S. - Nov 03, 2003 2:35:42 pm PST #2601 of 10001
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

Yay for everybody! Yay for procrastination!

Also, yay for Susan. I think it sounds fine, and sympatheticable. But still questionable enough for drama! pain! problems! So, all of the good.

Deena, nope, I don't think I know those particular Yazzie's. Flag's a little off my path, I'm mostly in northern NM and around the Show Low area in Arizona. But you never know, it's a small community, so I may run into them one day.