See, in my fantasy, when I'm kissing you... you're kissing me. It's okay. I can wait.

Oz ,'First Date'


Natter .44 Magnum: Do You Feel Chatty, Punk?  

Off-topic discussion. Wanna talk about corsets, duct tape, or physics? This is the place. Detailed discussion of any current-season TV must be whitefonted.


Nilly - May 22, 2006 9:43:43 am PDT #8491 of 10002
Swouncing

My personal deadline is June 1st, the editor's deadline is July 1st.

Oh, you're clever to have them separate.

I just want the time for a couple of beta reads, so I can tighten things up.

Me! Me! MeMEME!

Um, I mean, there's also the benefit of having some time between the actual writing and the last reading and polishing, right? Some distance from the words as well as the emotions, to look at them a bit more clearly, even with your own eyes?


Allyson - May 22, 2006 9:51:31 am PDT #8492 of 10002
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Okay, I got clarification. "childless" was just a poor word choice. She's gushing about the book and promising to be first in line to buy it. I feel much better now. Man. POOR WORD CHOICE.


§ ita § - May 22, 2006 9:52:38 am PDT #8493 of 10002
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

POOR WORD CHOICE.

See? You're a writer. You recognise that. She isn't and doesn't and so there nanny nanny boo boo.

Okay, off. I think I've sent all the e-mails and printed all the stuff required.


Nilly - May 22, 2006 9:57:03 am PDT #8494 of 10002
Swouncing

"childless" was just a poor word choice

Well, you're the writer.

[Edit: and now I'm x-posting in-spirit with ita. Who's next?]


Sue - May 22, 2006 10:21:00 am PDT #8495 of 10002
hip deep in pie

Introducing the new member of my extended family, my sister's new puppy, Kasey. At 10 weeks, she's already pretty big, she may turn out to be massive.


Kathy A - May 22, 2006 10:22:52 am PDT #8496 of 10002
We're very stretchy. - Connie Neil

Wow, big dog! Is she a golden lab mix?


Sue - May 22, 2006 10:24:26 am PDT #8497 of 10002
hip deep in pie

Nope, she's a purebred Golden Retriever. My sister's other dog's father is from the same breeder and is also very big. (And wide, but that's a whole other thing.)


sumi - May 22, 2006 10:27:18 am PDT #8498 of 10002
Art Crawl!!!

What a cutie!


Kathy A - May 22, 2006 10:29:47 am PDT #8499 of 10002
We're very stretchy. - Connie Neil

I remember when my brother's first Malamute was about that age--he was big, too (and had the cutest big paws to go with his size!!). I first saw the two he has now when they were about six-seven weeks old and still able to fit under the bottom shelf in the basement, where they loved to sleep. Big balls of fluff!

Of course, now, their "fluff" is shedding like mad and is coming off in clumps--Chase, especially, has the tendency to drop all of his undercoat at once. Dakota's comes off over the course of a month of so, so it isn't so messy to pet him.


tommyrot - May 22, 2006 10:30:10 am PDT #8500 of 10002
Sir, it's not an offence to let your cat eat your bacon. Okay? And we don't arrest cats, I'm very sorry.

Completely random punctuation question:

When using phrases like "I wonder..." etc., should the sentence end with a question mark?

Like, say, "I wonder what happened to my wombat?" There is a question there, but it is a question the writer is asking himself, not the reader. (eta: the writer is making a statement that he is wondering about something.) But then leaving the question mark off seems strange to me. OK, after thinking about it, they both seem strange to me. A quick Google seems to show both usages....

What is the rule? (I wonder.)