Their concentration impenetrable
The only thing impenetrable, in this relationship. I am surprised their brains have not leaked out through their nostrils and lovingly congealed into a signle sapient glop.
Jayne ,'Serenity'
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Their concentration impenetrable
The only thing impenetrable, in this relationship. I am surprised their brains have not leaked out through their nostrils and lovingly congealed into a signle sapient glop.
...ew.
the friction created by the potent drive drove the couple up a steep cliff just to propel them to an abyss of pure bliss
Why, it's almost poetry.
If by "almost" you mean, that it, like poety, is comprised of words.
It could be Vogon poetry.
Oh, come on Debet, doesn't that drove/drive, cliff/abyss/bliss just sing in your ears?
Oh, so that's singing that I'm hearing? And here I though it was my brain trying to escape.
Screaming can sound like singing sometimes.
Hee!
Hey, at least the writer created something that entertains people. Though not, perhaps, in the manner he or she intended.