Added. Sorry!
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Fan Fiction: Writers, Readers, and Enablers
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"Dead Xanders aren't much fun."
No quote from anything, just a thought.
You did mean to earworm me with "Dead Puppies," right, connie?
Yep. Thought I'd share the joy.
edit: If I could remember all the words I'd try a filk. The bit about "Now he's lying in the hall" kind of writes itself.
Read Modus Vivendi. Beautifully written, lovely angst, but too many loose ends at the end.
too many loose ends at the end
In terms of plot, or the characters' emotional states?
Plot. What was the significance of the dog, what happened to Bony and the old woman, and why the hell were they after Spike in the first place?
Emotions? Angsty torment, but I expected that.
edit: Plus I think Angel should have at least felt really bad for Liv being staked out in the middle of the lobby helpless like that. And where did she come from, anyway?
(that's vague enough not to be spoilery, right?)
What was the significance of the dog, what happened to Bony and the old woman, and why the hell were they after Spike in the first place?
Yeah, I would have liked some further exploration of that, too. I wasn't sure whether to take Spike's "explanation" at face value. I was willing to forgive plot stuff, because everything else was sooo wonderful, but I was a little disappointed in the lack of follow-through.
The dog, if I understand correctly, is [representative of Liv's status. Ownership and stuff. The thugs were really annoyed at Spike's cavalier adoption of their traditions. Traditions which we never actually learn, IIRC. ...Also, I'm not quite clear on why Xander was held captive against his will, since his own health was the only thing his freedom could've possibly endangered. I thought that there'd be an explanatory footnote in the eventual revelation of customs, but there was no revelation.]
I still really enjoyed the story, though. The angst is so painful, and the dialogue is so good.
Angst is good, but would just a tiny bit of hope of happiness accelerated the heat death of the universe?
I'm a schmoop, I admit it.
Oh yeah, I kind of liked it and then it seemed like the author got tired of writing it and just decided to make up an ending. I felt cheated.