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Fan Fiction: Writers, Readers, and Enablers  

This thread is for fanfic recs, links, and discussion, but not for actual posting of fanfic.


Connie Neil - Feb 11, 2003 11:24:11 am PST #3543 of 10000
brillig

I hate the mouse trail, but I might go back later and see if there's anything else fun there. My OTP.


askye - Feb 11, 2003 11:27:12 am PST #3544 of 10000
Thrive to spite them

You know what the thing on BBF reminds me of? The Smallville fic board on TWoP. Where there was one person, with her own little cult of sychophants, who made broad sweeping generalizations about very thing and then also lambasted "BNF" for having live journals or only having hangers on or followers that only praised them. "There all *mean* they have a cabal, they hate the little people" whine bitch whine bitch.

I wanted to say "dude!You're a big giant cauldron calling the kettle black." But of course I didn't, mostly I kept my mouth shut, got bored and left.

BTW the site behind the banner was hysterical.


Lyra Jane - Feb 11, 2003 11:41:24 am PST #3545 of 10000
Up with the sun

Consuela, that's interesting. And I do understand there are "professionals" and "amateurs" at fic, and of course you wouldn't criticize them the same way -- just as you don't judge your Uncle Ernie's painting with the same eye as a Picasso.

But assuming critics center their comments on the work, not the author, I think even the most delicate flower of a writer *should* be able to take being told that their Spike voice is off or they need to work on their grammar. And if not, frankly, I think writing for an audience (which is ultimately all about being told "no, that doesn't quite work, do it again") may not be their thing.

And as a follow-up question: Do you think readers should find out how much someone has published before giving negative feedback, and then tailor their words depending on if it's a first story or a fiftieth?


brenda m - Feb 11, 2003 11:46:02 am PST #3546 of 10000
If you're going through hell/keep on going/don't slow down/keep your fear from showing/you might be gone/'fore the devil even knows you're there

and then tailor their words depending on if it's a first story or a fiftieth?

Ideally, you'd be able to tell from the writing, but...

I find that the better the story, the more specific and maybe nit-picky my criticisms are likely to be. Because there's not a whole lot of point to a long, detailed criticism of something that's barely readable anyway, so if I'm inclined to send something at all, it'd be along the lines of "I'm having a hard time picturing Spike speaking and reacting that way, and I wonder if you might have gotten off track there. And a beta reader might be helpful with some grammatical quirks."


Connie Neil - Feb 11, 2003 11:47:58 am PST #3547 of 10000
brillig

I'm of two minds on the experience question. Individual works should stand on their own, but expectations aren't so high with a newbie. If Stephen King produced something full of typos and grammatical errors and glaring mistakes, I'd think he'd handed over his first draft and his editor was out on strike and the typesetters were all blind, though I might also wonder if he was backsliding on the recreational substances issue. A new person would get a bit more forgiveness from me, especially if their plot or characterization showed the sparks of greatness.


Consuela - Feb 11, 2003 12:08:08 pm PST #3548 of 10000
We are Buffistas. This isn't our first apocalypse. -- Pix

But assuming critics center their comments on the work, not the author, I think even the most delicate flower of a writer *should* be able to take being told that their Spike voice is off or they need to work on their grammar.

Ah, but they're not. And they don't agree (a) that they should be able to; (b) that you have the right to say so; (c) that their Spike voice is off; or (d) that their grammar is important.

Do you think readers should find out how much someone has published before giving negative feedback

Hmm. I think that I can sometimes tell from the care invested in a story whether a writer is receptive to critical comments. But usually I don't get picky in feedback except in a general way. That said, I've been known to make semi-critical comments on my blog or recs pages from time to time.

In the most purist sense, I don't think it's incumbent on the reader to know whether a writer is experienced or not. The conflict arises from the two separate ... paradigms, I guess, at work in ficdom.

The first is the paradigm of Writing, where the focus is on quality and workmanship. Writers use fic as practice ground, as ways to develop their skills and their techniques. Readers who operate within this paradigm look at the stories from that perspective, and respond to quality of technique and prose, as well as the actual content of the story.

The second paradigm is that of Community. The focus is on friendships and shared experiences and interests. People write for each other, and read each other's work and give encouraging feedback. Someone says, "I want to read a Spike/Riley PWP," and her friend writes her one.

There's certainly a lot of overlap between these two perspectives (Venn diagrams, anyone?) -- the Buffista fic community is an excellent example of both. But there are people for whom the second perspective is certainly primary: they don't care if the pov slips in the second chapter or if there's no way in hell Spike would ever sleep with Riley. And if you come all Writerly on them, they're going to react poorly.

Just a few thoughts on the issue. All IMHO, and YBMV.


Dana - Feb 11, 2003 12:13:19 pm PST #3549 of 10000
I'm terrifically busy with my ennui.

And they don't agree (a) that they should be able to; (b) that you have the right to say so; (c) that their Spike voice is off; or (d) that their grammar is important.

"Why are you taking this so seriously? It's only fanfic."


askye - Feb 11, 2003 12:16:23 pm PST #3550 of 10000
Thrive to spite them

Consuela's right, there are too many people who don't give a damn about running their stories through a spell checker. And there's someone on livejournal (don't remember who) that made the claim that for some people puncuation, etc was so difficult that these writers would have to look up the rules every time and this would negate the fun of writing. Also that spell check often offers a variety of words for certain mispellings and that's asking too much.

I have no idea if that entry was supposed to be sarcastic. Because hello! I have terrible puncuation and spelling. Hell there are times when spell check can't even figure out what word I'm trying to spell but I work at it. I'm sure when Elena and Fay and the others first saw my stories they tore their hair out "My god how can she be this bad." But hell I learned.

I don't get it this non spell check "it's too hard some of the words are the same" or if it looks like the person wrote the story, ran it through spell and grammar check once and then posted it.

I mean, your name is now associated with your stories. People know you for what you write. Throw out the names of writers--fic or pro and what do you think of? This is what these writers are now being known for---not caring enough to take time on their writing.

And if they don't care to take that time to treat it seriously then I don't either.


Consuela - Feb 11, 2003 12:16:41 pm PST #3551 of 10000
We are Buffistas. This isn't our first apocalypse. -- Pix

Wrod, Dana.

OTOH, I've rarely had that response to anything I say, because I've gotten pretty good at spotting the "written in chem lab" stories from the first three lines.

Generally anything with "please SEND FEdBack!" in the subject line is a dead giveaway.


Connie Neil - Feb 11, 2003 12:23:48 pm PST #3552 of 10000
brillig

I don't get it this non spell check "it's too hard some of the words are the same" or if it looks like the person wrote the story, ran it through spell and grammar check once and then posted it.

I was always of hte opinion that you write because you love words. If you just want to have a record of a really cool daydream, fair enough, but the level of chutzpah in assuming others are eager to read a transcript of your daydreams is mindboggling.

Ah, the homonym/other-nym giveaway of foolish trust in the spellchecker. I love pointing out to people who have had something professionally produced that there's a glaring error that a human being would have caught as opposed to the computer.