All the same sentence...
nothing to obviously an inviting or tacky
should be
nothing too obviously inviting or tacky
And don't you ever stand for that sort of thing. Someone ever tries to kill you, you try to kill 'em right back! ... You got the right same as anyone to live and try to kill people.
Mal ,'Our Mrs. Reynolds'
Fan Fiction: Writers, Readers, and Enablers
This thread is for fanfic recs, links, and discussion, but not for actual posting of fanfic.
P.M. Marc - Oct 04, 2002 9:24:25 am PDT #336 of 10000
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
shrift - Oct 04, 2002 9:24:45 am PDT #337 of 10000
"You can't put a price on the joy of not giving a shit." -Zenkitty
Aaaand I'll go in and fix the story file at the BFA, too.
Elena - Oct 04, 2002 9:25:29 am PDT #338 of 10000
Thanks for all the fish.
Oh, damn. And I noticed that, too, when reading it here... I knew that there was two things I wanted to mention in the beta.
Damn. I just got so caught up in the story.
P.M. Marc - Oct 04, 2002 9:26:26 am PDT #339 of 10000
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
Freaking goddesses.
No, seriously. It was something I'd reworked during a meeting and thought I'd fixed.
Dana - Oct 04, 2002 9:26:35 am PDT #340 of 10000
I'm terrifically busy with my ennui.
Fixed and sent through the queue.
If it makes you feel better, I read through the story before you replied, and I didn't even see the errors.
P.M. Marc - Oct 04, 2002 9:28:37 am PDT #341 of 10000
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
Shweet. Thanks.
I'm not awake fully, and won't be until I hit work and the blessed beanjuice gets me. I really ought to have learned my lessons by now.
shrift - Oct 04, 2002 9:31:23 am PDT #342 of 10000
"You can't put a price on the joy of not giving a shit." -Zenkitty
Story fixed on the archive.
I really ought to have learned my lessons by now.
Heh. This is why I like having administrative power. Because I haven't quite learned my lessons, either.
P.M. Marc - Oct 04, 2002 9:36:05 am PDT #343 of 10000
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
The worst part is, when I sent in on GO, I sent a copy to myself, read it over, and *still* missed it.
P.M. Marc - Oct 04, 2002 6:54:05 pm PDT #344 of 10000
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
Heh. Kind of liked People Undone.
Rebecca Lizard - Oct 04, 2002 11:14:35 pm PDT #345 of 10000
You sip / say it's your crazy / straw say it's you're crazy / as you bicycle your soul / with beauty in your basket
I love that writer.