All the same sentence...
nothing to obviously an inviting or tacky
should be
nothing too obviously inviting or tacky
I swear, one of these times, you're gonna wake up in a coma.
Cordelia ,'Showtime'
Fan Fiction: Writers, Readers, and Enablers
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P.M. Marc - Oct 04, 2002 9:24:25 am PDT #336 of 10000
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
shrift - Oct 04, 2002 9:24:45 am PDT #337 of 10000
"You can't put a price on the joy of not giving a shit." -Zenkitty
Aaaand I'll go in and fix the story file at the BFA, too.
Elena - Oct 04, 2002 9:25:29 am PDT #338 of 10000
Thanks for all the fish.
Oh, damn. And I noticed that, too, when reading it here... I knew that there was two things I wanted to mention in the beta.
Damn. I just got so caught up in the story.
P.M. Marc - Oct 04, 2002 9:26:26 am PDT #339 of 10000
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
Freaking goddesses.
No, seriously. It was something I'd reworked during a meeting and thought I'd fixed.
Dana - Oct 04, 2002 9:26:35 am PDT #340 of 10000
"I'm useless alone." // "We're all useless alone. It's a good thing you're not alone."
Fixed and sent through the queue.
If it makes you feel better, I read through the story before you replied, and I didn't even see the errors.
P.M. Marc - Oct 04, 2002 9:28:37 am PDT #341 of 10000
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
Shweet. Thanks.
I'm not awake fully, and won't be until I hit work and the blessed beanjuice gets me. I really ought to have learned my lessons by now.
shrift - Oct 04, 2002 9:31:23 am PDT #342 of 10000
"You can't put a price on the joy of not giving a shit." -Zenkitty
Story fixed on the archive.
I really ought to have learned my lessons by now.
Heh. This is why I like having administrative power. Because I haven't quite learned my lessons, either.
P.M. Marc - Oct 04, 2002 9:36:05 am PDT #343 of 10000
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
The worst part is, when I sent in on GO, I sent a copy to myself, read it over, and *still* missed it.
P.M. Marc - Oct 04, 2002 6:54:05 pm PDT #344 of 10000
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
Heh. Kind of liked People Undone.
Rebecca Lizard - Oct 04, 2002 11:14:35 pm PDT #345 of 10000
You sip / say it's your crazy / straw say it's you're crazy / as you bicycle your soul / with beauty in your basket
I love that writer.