The thing that makes me suspicious about that essay is the handwriting of the comments.
Otherwise, that kid is smoking some bad crack.
Two by two, hands of blue. Two by two, hands of blue.
River ,'Ariel'
Natter 41: Why Do I Click on ita's Links?!
Off-topic discussion. Wanna talk about corsets, duct tape, or physics? This is the place. Detailed discussion of any current-season TV must be whitefonted.
Sue - Jan 10, 2006 3:34:53 pm PST #9111 of 10002
hip deep in pie
Allyson - Jan 10, 2006 3:37:21 pm PST #9112 of 10002
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
I am broken.
Lee - Jan 10, 2006 3:37:53 pm PST #9113 of 10002
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.
The NY IT people broke our computers again. I hate it when they do that.
sarameg - Jan 10, 2006 3:40:21 pm PST #9114 of 10002
I'm sorry ita. I'm usually pretty ok with kid noise, but not shrieking. Or that kid having a 40 minute convo on his cell consisting entirely of "Whuh! WHUH! whuh. WHUH!"
Maybe you should invest those noise-cancelling headphones, for irritating neighbors and bad migraines.
sarameg - Jan 10, 2006 3:41:13 pm PST #9115 of 10002
Keep breathing, Allyson. I take it you're kind of feeling wrung out?
§ ita § - Jan 10, 2006 3:45:13 pm PST #9116 of 10002
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.
Allyson, breathe deeply.
sara, they have been shrieking since I got home, which is almost two hours. Can I bill their parents for painkillers? My place really isn't large enough for any of it to be considered outdoor play area.
Speaking of Waking The Dead (wasn't I?) the pattern of making the team members look shady pales in comparison to the idea of killing off a core cast member two series running. I did yell, though. He'd better not be dead. Too predictable.
Consuela - Jan 10, 2006 3:45:23 pm PST #9117 of 10002
We are Buffistas. This isn't our first apocalypse. -- Pix
hairpats, Allyson.
Hang in there.
Lee - Jan 10, 2006 3:47:04 pm PST #9118 of 10002
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.
Poor Allyson. Sarameg, ita and Consuela all have good advice. I hope you can find a way to feel unbroken quickly.
Allyson - Jan 10, 2006 3:49:12 pm PST #9119 of 10002
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
One of my beta readers came back to me with some pretty solid evidence that what I have is a jumbled piece of crap with no clear thesis statement or conclusion.
And so, I'll have to do some serious work on that, as well as come up with the rest of the book, well, tonight.
When i think about it, my eyes well up.
quester - Jan 10, 2006 3:49:56 pm PST #9120 of 10002
Danger is my middle name, only I spell it R. u. t. h. - Tina Belcher.
sorry, Allyson. I didn't realize it was serious.
ION: I have this cough that makes it very hard to sleep, so I stayed home and tried to nap. But one of my neighbors decided to play his early 80's musical collection VERY loud. He apparently does this cause most of the time everyone else is away during the day.