Mal: Okay. She won't be winning any beauty contests anytime soon. But she is solid. Ship like this, be with ya 'til the day you die. Zoe: 'Cause it's a deathtrap.

'Out Of Gas'


Fan Fiction II: Great story! Where's the sequel?

This thread is for fanfic recs, links, and discussion, but not for actual posting of fanfic.


SuziQ - Apr 06, 2013 4:38:49 pm PDT #8453 of 10434
Back tattoos of the mother is that you are absolutely right - Ame

For me, if it is a typo or spelling mistake that has some logic to it, like homophones, then it doesn't bug me too much. When an author uses full out wrong words, I tend to tread carefully. Multiple occurances, I'm outta there. I don't want to have to stuggle to figure out what you are trying to say.


Connie Neil - Apr 06, 2013 4:49:47 pm PDT #8454 of 10434
brillig

I'm really surprised at how often SHIELD gets misspelled as SHEILD. It's such an easy thing to find and replace.


P.M. Marc - Apr 07, 2013 9:05:52 am PDT #8455 of 10434
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear

... so how are they spelling choked?


Cass - Apr 07, 2013 10:38:53 am PDT #8456 of 10434
Bob's learned to live with tragedy, but he knows that this tragedy is one that won't ever leave him or get better.

... so how are they spelling choked?

Brocken.

I also warned Cass that she may not want to read it right now.

For which I am very, very grateful. I would have gone straight in to the update and, to make matters potentially worse, I was with family this weekend. I just put it in a place to read later.

It's a brilliant story but I can't handle that part right now.


Beverly - Apr 07, 2013 11:44:00 am PDT #8457 of 10434
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Chocked. Which, just always brings back Pat Roach trying to kill Indiana Jones with the wheel chocks from the plane in Raiders.


§ ita § - Apr 07, 2013 2:42:04 pm PDT #8458 of 10434
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

I keep seeing Twist And Shout referred to as the Dean/Castiel tearjerker, in that every pairing on every show has one. I haven't read it, and the weepy gushing doesn't pull me towards it (still shying from most of the Major Character Death tags, and their ilk). But I'm wondering if it is indeed fair to say most pairings have their equivalent to this fic-can you guys think of an equivalent sort of a thing for the slices of fics you read?

I think I'm now seeing "chocked" more than the rein/reign substitutions, not least of all because someone is forever letting out a "chocked sob" during the very emotional fucking.


Beverly - Apr 07, 2013 3:31:57 pm PDT #8459 of 10434
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Another thing which is a dearth of vocabulary more than anything else is "lathed the velvety skin with his tongue". Now, I know what a lathe is, and I've actually used one. I do not want anything near me that operates at that RPM, and unless it was a character I was determined to punish, not near any of their tender bits, either. The word these smiths are reaching for is probably "laved," which has the same root as lavish and lavabo and has to do with bathing, submerging, usually in liquid. Which...yeah, not so appealing, either. Tongue-bath is what I assume they're going for and really? Just as, or more, appealing, really.


Connie Neil - Apr 07, 2013 3:41:30 pm PDT #8460 of 10434
brillig

"Nothing Left to Lose" is probably the big tearjerker in the Sheppard/McKay neighborhood of Stargate Atlantis. I know don't read it unless I'm feeling particularly mentally sturdy.


Juliebird - Apr 07, 2013 3:51:49 pm PDT #8461 of 10434
I am the fly who dreams of the spider

Rereading the summary for Twist and Shout fills me with despair. I cried, and was depressed and angry for days after finishing it.


Atropa - Apr 07, 2013 8:59:58 pm PDT #8462 of 10434
The artist formerly associated with cupcakes.

I can't think of a big tear-jerker fic in bandom, but that's probably more a reflection of my reading habits than anything else.