Hmm. It's sounds like the finest party I can imagine getting paid to go to.

Mal ,'Shindig'


Fan Fiction II: Great story! Where's the sequel?

This thread is for fanfic recs, links, and discussion, but not for actual posting of fanfic.


P.M. Marc - Apr 07, 2013 9:05:52 am PDT #8455 of 10434
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear

... so how are they spelling choked?


Cass - Apr 07, 2013 10:38:53 am PDT #8456 of 10434
Bob's learned to live with tragedy, but he knows that this tragedy is one that won't ever leave him or get better.

... so how are they spelling choked?

Brocken.

I also warned Cass that she may not want to read it right now.

For which I am very, very grateful. I would have gone straight in to the update and, to make matters potentially worse, I was with family this weekend. I just put it in a place to read later.

It's a brilliant story but I can't handle that part right now.


Beverly - Apr 07, 2013 11:44:00 am PDT #8457 of 10434
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Chocked. Which, just always brings back Pat Roach trying to kill Indiana Jones with the wheel chocks from the plane in Raiders.


§ ita § - Apr 07, 2013 2:42:04 pm PDT #8458 of 10434
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

I keep seeing Twist And Shout referred to as the Dean/Castiel tearjerker, in that every pairing on every show has one. I haven't read it, and the weepy gushing doesn't pull me towards it (still shying from most of the Major Character Death tags, and their ilk). But I'm wondering if it is indeed fair to say most pairings have their equivalent to this fic-can you guys think of an equivalent sort of a thing for the slices of fics you read?

I think I'm now seeing "chocked" more than the rein/reign substitutions, not least of all because someone is forever letting out a "chocked sob" during the very emotional fucking.


Beverly - Apr 07, 2013 3:31:57 pm PDT #8459 of 10434
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Another thing which is a dearth of vocabulary more than anything else is "lathed the velvety skin with his tongue". Now, I know what a lathe is, and I've actually used one. I do not want anything near me that operates at that RPM, and unless it was a character I was determined to punish, not near any of their tender bits, either. The word these smiths are reaching for is probably "laved," which has the same root as lavish and lavabo and has to do with bathing, submerging, usually in liquid. Which...yeah, not so appealing, either. Tongue-bath is what I assume they're going for and really? Just as, or more, appealing, really.


Connie Neil - Apr 07, 2013 3:41:30 pm PDT #8460 of 10434
brillig

"Nothing Left to Lose" is probably the big tearjerker in the Sheppard/McKay neighborhood of Stargate Atlantis. I know don't read it unless I'm feeling particularly mentally sturdy.


Juliebird - Apr 07, 2013 3:51:49 pm PDT #8461 of 10434
I am the fly who dreams of the spider

Rereading the summary for Twist and Shout fills me with despair. I cried, and was depressed and angry for days after finishing it.


Atropa - Apr 07, 2013 8:59:58 pm PDT #8462 of 10434
The artist formerly associated with cupcakes.

I can't think of a big tear-jerker fic in bandom, but that's probably more a reflection of my reading habits than anything else.


P.M. Marc - Apr 07, 2013 9:59:42 pm PDT #8463 of 10434
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear

There was that depressing Cobra Starship hookerfic, but that was more gloomy than tear-jerking.

The "got popular enough to become a cliche" one in Sherlock is Alone on the Water.


§ ita § - Apr 08, 2013 9:14:13 am PDT #8464 of 10434
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

Julie, can you put the Twist And Shout plot in spoilerfont?