There were a lot of prior instances where the author didn't seem to understand the use of apostrophes, so not a good impression already, but that word swap was the last straw.
You'd never make it. I'd rip your spine out before you got half a step. Those little legs wouldn't be much good without one of those.
Glory ,'The Killer In Me'
Fan Fiction II: Great story! Where's the sequel?
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Matt the Bruins fan - Apr 05, 2013 4:47:33 pm PDT #8434 of 10434
"I remember when they eventually introduced that drug kingpin who murdered people and smuggled drugs inside snakes and I was like 'Finally. A normal person.'” —RahvinDragand
Lee - Apr 05, 2013 4:57:51 pm PDT #8435 of 10434
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.
I mean, Cass and Jilli and Lee can all speak to the EPIC depths to which I plunged for my Dark Angel hits.
You are not wrong
Connie Neil - Apr 05, 2013 5:23:56 pm PDT #8436 of 10434
brillig
There is at least one fic that I enjoyed so much that I copied it to my hard drive and edited it into readabilty. I was tempted to send my copy to the author but resisted.
SuziQ - Apr 05, 2013 6:14:59 pm PDT #8437 of 10434
Back tattoos of the mother is that you are absolutely right - Ame
Aloud instead of allowed? Oy. Just hit that one.
Though, I'm a bit more tolerant of those types of mistakes over the author notes with "Wow, I hope you really like this. Comments pleeeeeaaaasssssssssseeeeeee",
Connie Neil - Apr 05, 2013 6:25:55 pm PDT #8438 of 10434
brillig
"This is my first fic EVAH! Please tell me you like it!!!"
Sigh.
Beverly - Apr 05, 2013 6:57:29 pm PDT #8439 of 10434
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
I sometimes inadvertently do the homophone thing myself, so I can't really object if one or two slip by in someone else's writing. I do try to catch them in editing, though.
Connie Neil - Apr 05, 2013 8:17:00 pm PDT #8440 of 10434
brillig
I'm getting puzzled at the prevalence of "wondering" instead of "wandering." It's like the authors have only ever heard the words and are trusting their spellcheckers too much. Though wondering could work I guess.
Matt the Bruins fan - Apr 06, 2013 3:29:03 am PDT #8441 of 10434
"I remember when they eventually introduced that drug kingpin who murdered people and smuggled drugs inside snakes and I was like 'Finally. A normal person.'” —RahvinDragand
When I see "I suck at tags" my first thought is "thanks for warning people up front that you have difficulty putting your thoughts down in word form."
Anne W. - Apr 06, 2013 3:38:40 am PDT #8442 of 10434
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.
Tumblr-style tags on fic are a huge red flag for me. What is a tag of 'what is this I don't even' supposed to tell me about your fic, exactly?
WindSparrow - Apr 06, 2013 3:48:38 am PDT #8443 of 10434
Love is stronger than death and harder than sorrow. Those who practice it are fierce like the light of stars traveling eons to pierce the night.
"I have the emotional maturity of a pack of 13 year old girls, and the depth of this fic reflects this."
Presumably.