Lorne: My little prince. Oh…what did they do to you? Angel: Nina…tried to…eat me. Lorne: Oh, you're--medic! You're gonna make it Angel. Just don't stop fighting. Doctor! Is there a Gepetto in the house?

'Smile Time'


Fan Fiction II: Great story! Where's the sequel?

This thread is for fanfic recs, links, and discussion, but not for actual posting of fanfic.


Connie Neil - Mar 11, 2013 7:33:54 pm PDT #8392 of 10434
brillig

I'm wallowing in Avengers fic and loving it, but I keep getting peeved at people apologizing for their stories and all that. If there's something wrong with it, fix it, otherwise let it stand on its own.


Matt the Bruins fan - Mar 12, 2013 8:03:19 am PDT #8393 of 10434
"I remember when they eventually introduced that drug kingpin who murdered people and smuggled drugs inside snakes and I was like 'Finally. A normal person.'” —RahvinDragand

But what would the 13 year-old ESL homeschooled writers that don't know anyone who can beta read or have access to a dictionary but have to get their Avengers-attend-Hogwarts-OMG!-how-cool-is-that?-IDEK-feels-LOLLOLLOL fic out into the world do then?

Sam_Storyteller and Domenika Marzione are my gold standards for Avengers fic written by someone who understands how adults interact.


erikaj - Mar 12, 2013 8:16:34 am PDT #8394 of 10434
Always Anti-fascist!

I also think they think they are protecting themselves against criticism by doing that. Like if they say their plot's weak than you won't.


Connie Neil - Mar 12, 2013 8:30:10 am PDT #8395 of 10434
brillig

Like if they say their plot's weak than you won't.

Yeah, when they helpfully tell me they can't write plot I take them at their word and move on.


WindSparrow - Mar 12, 2013 9:39:54 am PDT #8396 of 10434
Love is stronger than death and harder than sorrow. Those who practice it are fierce like the light of stars traveling eons to pierce the night.

I don't DO plot. I do cute little (or sometimes angsty little) vignettes. They aren't supposed to have plot. once in a while I get a bunch of little vignettes which follow each other in sequence sufficiently coherently to mimic plot. Of course, in my summaries I do not advertise the lack of plot; I broadcast the vignette-having.

And then people leave me reviews asking about the rest of the story.


Connie Neil - Mar 12, 2013 10:10:19 am PDT #8397 of 10434
brillig

And then people leave me reviews asking about the rest of the story.

We're sorry. We like the plot that you didn't know you were crafting.


Cass - Mar 12, 2013 8:56:29 pm PDT #8398 of 10434
Bob's learned to live with tragedy, but he knows that this tragedy is one that won't ever leave him or get better.

Of course, in my summaries I do not advertise the lack of plot; I broadcast the vignette-having.

I think accentuating the positive is really a much more attractive way to advertise your fic. Amuse me with your banter and I don't care that nothing happens. I recognize there is no plot, I just don't really care if I have fun reading it.


WindSparrow - Mar 13, 2013 8:04:58 am PDT #8399 of 10434
Love is stronger than death and harder than sorrow. Those who practice it are fierce like the light of stars traveling eons to pierce the night.

I think accentuating the positive is really a much more attractive way to advertise your fic. Amuse me with your banter and I don't care that nothing happens. I recognize there is no plot, I just don't really care if I have fun reading it.

And that is precisely what I write, most of the time. They don't leave the office, they just sit there snarking at each other. I suppose it is like going to a soup-and-salad bar expecting a full five-course meal but really, between the low word count and the "fluffy/angsty tag for ep. 15" summary, if readers go in expecting an imaginative resolution for the main story arc plus the lead characters' UST, that is just not my fault. Of course, I rarely get that response from writers whose work I respect - they generally get that I have done exactly what I set out to do, and are entertained or intrigued by it.


Connie Neil - Mar 13, 2013 8:26:25 am PDT #8400 of 10434
brillig

I'd be thrilled to see "fluffy fun, no plot!" instead of "I'm so sorry, I don't even, why do I think I can write, please don't hate this."


WindSparrow - Mar 13, 2013 8:50:31 am PDT #8401 of 10434
Love is stronger than death and harder than sorrow. Those who practice it are fierce like the light of stars traveling eons to pierce the night.

And when you dare suggest to such a writer that conforming to conventions of punctuation and formating help one's work to put its best foot forward and assist one's readers in enjoying it all the more, you get "well i wuz just writing for FUN you don't have to be all english teecher on my a$$"

That or you get asked to beta by someone more eager for attention than actually learning from her (or his, I suppose, I just have not experienced such a male person) mistakes and your suggestions.

I'm not sure which is worse.