River: 1001. 1002. Simon: River... River: Shh. I'm counting between the lightning and the thunder to see if the storm is coming or going. .1005

'The Message'


Fan Fiction II: Great story! Where's the sequel?

This thread is for fanfic recs, links, and discussion, but not for actual posting of fanfic.


Consuela - Aug 08, 2005 11:42:14 am PDT #749 of 10434
We are Buffistas. This isn't our first apocalypse. -- Pix

So, no, Betsy, they're not done for the season. I suspect that given the strong response, we may see Vala again. At least that's my hope.

*waits patiently*

Gah. You saw me up above: I just can't do banter. We need Shalott or Shrift or Dana to write it. I have hopes of Taf's new thing: she does good banter.


Betsy HP - Aug 08, 2005 11:57:17 am PDT #750 of 10434
If I only had a brain...

I do good banter, she said immodestly, but I just... can't make the chemistry work.


Betsy HP - Aug 08, 2005 11:57:53 am PDT #751 of 10434
If I only had a brain...

I mean, Vala ties him to the bed, prepares to have her way with him, and he asks her to go get his reading glasses and an artifact.


Emily - Aug 08, 2005 12:13:17 pm PDT #752 of 10434
"In the equation E = mc⬧, c⬧ is a pretty big honking number." - Scola

Kinky.


Betsy HP - Aug 08, 2005 12:17:20 pm PDT #753 of 10434
If I only had a brain...

But not in a good way.


Consuela - Aug 08, 2005 12:47:51 pm PDT #754 of 10434
We are Buffistas. This isn't our first apocalypse. -- Pix

I mean, Vala ties him to the bed, prepares to have her way with him, and he asks her to go get his reading glasses and an artifact.

No, no, you need something else in there.

Like...they all go offworld and they get jumped by the Orii and Daniel loses his GDO and Vala never had one anyway. Cam and Teal'c get away. D & V have to hide in the woods and steal food from the local's gardens and stuff.

So there's keeping watch, and guarding each others' backs, and whispered arguments about what to do next. She loses a bit of the high-maintenance stuff, because it's necessary and she's competent. They each save each other's life once or twice. Perhaps there's some small injuries. They're living in each others' pockets for a week or so, without the pretense and with no room for annoyance: if they don't get along, they'll get killed.

Not a lot of overt bonding, but a slow growth of respect on both sides, and Daniel realizes that there are ways in which Vala can be trusted, even if she's still a con artist.

I don't see sex on a bed: it's in the dirt, hiding from the bad guys tromping around with torches and spears, without words, and with most of their clothes on, desperate and hurried. And afterwards, they don't talk about it. Much.

Hmm.


Dana - Aug 08, 2005 12:59:20 pm PDT #755 of 10434
I'm terrifically busy with my ennui.

See, I don't really do plot. But you seem to have a good start...


Betsy HP - Aug 08, 2005 1:08:14 pm PDT #756 of 10434
If I only had a brain...

::genuflects::


Connie Neil - Aug 08, 2005 1:11:38 pm PDT #757 of 10434
brillig

I think Consuela's volunteering . . .


Fay - Aug 08, 2005 1:19:50 pm PDT #758 of 10434
"Fuck Western ideologically-motivated gender identification!" Sulu gasped, and came.

Go 'Suela, Go 'Suela, Go 'Suela!

waves pompoms

(I now own Seasons 1 through 7 of SG1. Go Team Me!)