No. You're missing the point. The design of the thing is functional. The plan is not to shoot you. The plan is to get the girl. If there's no girl, then the plan, well, is like the room.

Early ,'Objects In Space'


Fan Fiction II: Great story! Where's the sequel?

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§ ita § - Jul 13, 2011 11:47:06 am PDT #7104 of 10452
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

Wot?

Okay, only some of them.


Dana - Jul 13, 2011 11:48:26 am PDT #7105 of 10452
I haven't trusted science since I saw the film "Flubber."

Blimey!


Vonnie K - Jul 13, 2011 11:53:37 am PDT #7106 of 10452
Kiss me, my girl, before I'm sick.

But "huh" is... I dunno. More subdued and less emphatic. There is a contemplative quality to the puzzlement. It's a super-useful term! Almost as useful as "eh", which I use all the time. Next, you're gonna tell me Brits don't use "eh" either!


Consuela - Jul 13, 2011 11:55:20 am PDT #7107 of 10452
We are Buffistas. This isn't our first apocalypse. -- Pix

I actually did switch out "Huh." for "Blimey," but I really really don't like it. Gonna have to think on that.

It's also got to be chronologically-appropriate, as we're talking about English schoolkids in 1939. Argh.


§ ita § - Jul 13, 2011 11:56:50 am PDT #7108 of 10452
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

"Wot?" doesn't have to be emphatic. But, more seriously, I think I'd probably have said "What?" or "What's that?" when I was at my most British, rather than "Huh?"

Not that I've ever thought about it beforehand. I would be the worst Ameri or Britpicker EVER. I could Jampick, though. Kinda.


§ ita § - Jul 13, 2011 11:58:25 am PDT #7109 of 10452
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

I actually did switch out "Huh." for "Blimey,"

Are they Cockney? Did your beta suggest that? That does make me remember "Cor!" which I might have said out of surprise, but not questioning.


Calli - Jul 13, 2011 11:58:49 am PDT #7110 of 10452
I must obey the inscrutable exhortations of my soul—Calvin and Hobbs

Maybe, "Hmmm"?


Vonnie K - Jul 13, 2011 12:01:03 pm PDT #7111 of 10452
Kiss me, my girl, before I'm sick.

It's also got to be chronologically-appropriate, as we're talking about English schoolkids in 1939.

Oh, right. This is Narnia. I'm, like, the only person around who's never read a single Narnia book. I think I might have watched an animated version of the first book that was made back in the 1970's when I was wee (dubbed, of course.) It's like that time when I didn't know what the hell "Where the Wild Things Were" was and had people look at me askance.


§ ita § - Jul 13, 2011 12:02:34 pm PDT #7112 of 10452
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

Vonnie, I know you're not a born American, but that's no excuse for being heathen! OMGlolol!


Vonnie K - Jul 13, 2011 12:06:21 pm PDT #7113 of 10452
Kiss me, my girl, before I'm sick.

t sticks out tongue at ita

Now, Anne of Green Gables? We were ALL OVER that. And A Dog of Flanders, which I was surprised to hear was not that very popular here (it IS an awful downer.)

And don't even talk to me about Sesame Street. I still don't know what Bert and Ernie look like.