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Fan Fiction II: Great story! Where's the sequel?

This thread is for fanfic recs, links, and discussion, but not for actual posting of fanfic.


Matt the Bruins fan - Oct 01, 2007 6:03:40 pm PDT #4396 of 10436
"I remember when they eventually introduced that drug kingpin who murdered people and smuggled drugs inside snakes and I was like 'Finally. A normal person.'” —RahvinDragand

Aims - Oct 02, 2007 9:37:31 am PDT #4397 of 10436
Shit's all sorts of different now.

How soon is too soon to resend edits back to your beta? She sent me comments that I got this morning and I worked on them (being the slacker that I am) and I think I took care of everything she mentioned, but I worry that it's too soon.

Also, do I send it back without the comments?

I such a N00b.


Fay - Oct 02, 2007 7:06:01 pm PDT #4398 of 10436
"Fuck Western ideologically-motivated gender identification!" Sulu gasped, and came.

Audiofic! I'm terribly impressed that it exists! And can be downloaded onto my iPod! Good job universe! In honour of which I downloaded some free software last night and started recording stories, because I really love reading stories out loud, as, er, you may have gathered from the last F2F I attended. Er. Anyway, yes - SO delighted by this turn of events!

I think I may ask AJ Hall how she'd feel about having Lust Over Pendle recorded on audio. I mean, she might well not be comfortable with that, but I think I may have to ask, because - LOVE!!!


Consuela - Oct 02, 2007 7:11:29 pm PDT #4399 of 10436
We are Buffistas. This isn't our first apocalypse. -- Pix

Aimee, every beta-relationship is different.

For myself, if I got beta-comments back from someone, and I made all those changes, I probably wouldn't send it back again, or if I did, it would be with apologies and a request to look for something in particular (like typos, or a rewrite of one problematic scene), rather than ask them to look at the entire story again.

Beta is work, and it behooves us to treat our betas nicely so they will continue helping us.

Which I'm sure you know, but it's worth saying anyway.


Atropa - Oct 02, 2007 7:55:26 pm PDT #4400 of 10436
The artist formerly associated with cupcakes.

In honour of which I downloaded some free software last night and started recording stories

Fay! You will share those recorded stories with us, right? Because I would *love* to be able to listen to you reading me fic while I'm stuck on the bus.


P.M. Marc - Oct 02, 2007 8:18:19 pm PDT #4401 of 10436
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear

Aimee, how long is your story?

If it's short, I wouldn't bother sending it back once you'd made the changes. I only get into severe beta feedback looping on longer stuff, and I'm trying to break myself of that habit, because lord, I could wind up in an endless test pass otherwise.


Fay - Oct 02, 2007 10:42:26 pm PDT #4402 of 10436
"Fuck Western ideologically-motivated gender identification!" Sulu gasped, and came.

Fay! You will share those recorded stories with us, right? Because I would *love* to be able to listen to you reading me fic while I'm stuck on the bus.

Bless you!

My cunning plan at present is to upload them to the LJ community called audiofic, from which they can then be merrily downloaded. I've recorded one little LotR piece about Grima, one little all-dialogue comic turn featuring Snape/Lupin and am working on recording one piece of Good Omens fic at present. (Don't think I'm likely to record anything particularly X-rated.)


Sophia Brooks - Oct 03, 2007 1:48:54 am PDT #4403 of 10436
Cats to become a rabbit should gather immediately now here

In honour of which I downloaded some free software last night and started recording stories

Fay! You will share those recorded stories with us, right? Because I would *love* to be able to listen to you reading me fic while I'm stuck on the bus.

I am Jilli.


Aims - Oct 03, 2007 3:45:05 am PDT #4404 of 10436
Shit's all sorts of different now.

Story's just over 2k words. I made the changes and sent the whole thing back to her before I checked back here. She seemed fine with it. I don't know her at all, but she's really great and her feedback's been really helpful and I really like her stories that I've read. She had a couple more things on the second go-round and then she thinks ti can be posted. Whee!

I have also stumbled upon some ... wow ... I can't call it "bad" fic cause I haven't read it (and a lot of it - probably won't), but when I read a pairing as Ron/Hermione and then in the warnings read "beastiality", I have the thought "Crookshanks?" and then click away screaming.

I'm all for the slash and the sex and the porny, but some of this stuff is just ... wow.


askye - Oct 03, 2007 3:49:54 am PDT #4405 of 10436
Thrive to spite them

I would love to have Fay read fic.

There's also a slash only comm called podslash.