Damn, Nutty. You're fast with revisions.
This mean you're done revising? (If so, I shall cease with the more thorough comments on half the second.)
I-I'm just taking things without paying for th... In what twisted dictionary is that stealing?
Willow ,'Showtime'
Fan Fiction II: Great story! Where's the sequel?
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P.M. Marc - Mar 18, 2007 3:56:49 pm PDT #3500 of 10434
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
Nutty - Mar 18, 2007 4:07:34 pm PDT #3501 of 10434
"Mister Spock is on his fanny, sir. Reports heavy damage."
Uh... yeah. I mean, I might rewrite till the end of days, so feel free to send what you've done, but. Next week is all shot, including the weekend, and I just needed to get it out of my brain. Sorry!
(Did I leave the house this weekend? No!)
P.M. Marc - Mar 18, 2007 4:15:16 pm PDT #3502 of 10434
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
Eh, most of what I'd thought needed work was in the first third. After that, it got a lot more solid, so anything I'd be suggesting would be me picking at nits that other people've already had at.
(Did I leave my house this weekend? Hell yes! In fact, the stuff I sent to you yesterday was pretty much all I did at home all weekend. I partied. It was good. And I kept wanting to reference your story, but then I remembered that Lee and Cass couldn't have read it yet, on account of it not being live yet, which is a good sign that it worked, even in raw form.)
Cass - Mar 18, 2007 4:28:14 pm PDT #3503 of 10434
Bob's learned to live with tragedy, but he knows that this tragedy is one that won't ever leave him or get better.
And I kept wanting to reference your story, but then I remembered that Lee and Cass couldn't have read it yet, on account of it not being live yet, which is a good sign that it worked, even in raw form.I'll second this, because the stuff we were talking about? Goooood.
Drat, wish this had already been live to chat about as well.
(Still reading. Going back now.)
P.M. Marc - Mar 18, 2007 4:31:23 pm PDT #3504 of 10434
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
I shall note that it appears that my remaining nits were, in fact, picked.
3/4 through, and we appear to be essentially nitless.
Consuela - Mar 18, 2007 7:06:45 pm PDT #3505 of 10434
We are Buffistas. This isn't our first apocalypse. -- Pix
Really, it's marvelous and I am not The Author.
t reminds self that beta is an Advisory role, not Management
esse - Mar 19, 2007 2:23:39 am PDT #3506 of 10434
S to the A -- using they/them pronouns!
Looking forward to sitting down and reading this, Nutty.
Cass - Mar 19, 2007 9:34:33 am PDT #3507 of 10434
Bob's learned to live with tragedy, but he knows that this tragedy is one that won't ever leave him or get better.
Nutty, I just spent all morning reading Six of One and am just ... wow.
Ailleann - Mar 19, 2007 9:37:00 am PDT #3508 of 10434
vanguard of the socialist Hollywood liberal homosexualist agenda
need to watch S2 very fast so I can stop avoiding spoiled!fic
Beverly - Mar 19, 2007 10:10:04 am PDT #3509 of 10434
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
I am reading, and my brow is furrowed in concern, much like Sam's. But I keep having to go DO things. Why is real life interfering with my fic-reading, why?